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Name this poem .....if you can?

  1. ahorseback profile image54
    ahorsebackposted 5 years ago

    I will find you.......I will you know
    no matter the night or day
    It all comes down gently in surprise
    That my dear is always the way

    It will come in microscopic touch
    one finger tangled in your hair
    Or perhaps the way the sun
    lays against pillows there

    But I will sneak into the smallest
    open crack within your breast
    And then what?.....It's all
    over ...love knows whats best

    Did you really think you would
    hide....stay so long inside
    That I wouldn't borrow your
    soul....take it along for a ride

    You may have a heart made of stone...
    a soul of iron....a mind of steel
    But I....I will turn them to liguid
    And your soul will begin to reel

    1. perfectperception profile image60
      perfectperceptionposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Call it "I will"!  It's definitely a poem about perseverance.  LOL

  2. Jaggedfrost profile image87
    Jaggedfrostposted 5 years ago

    The problem with anyone giving it a name is that we cant see your heart enough to do the task justice.  A title is a teaser, a cypher, a way, an added clue that helps the readers focus on what is important, decode the meanings, or an added dimension to the mystery.

    1. ahorseback profile image54
      ahorsebackposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      I was in a mood for teasing. This morning .

  3. couturepopcafe profile image60
    couturepopcafeposted 5 years ago

    So call it "Reel".

    1. ahorseback profile image54
      ahorsebackposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thats a good one!

  4. sofs profile image86
    sofsposted 5 years ago

    I'll go with Love Knows best!! beautiful.

    1. ahorseback profile image54
      ahorsebackposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks! I like that.

  5. 2uesday profile image88
    2uesdayposted 5 years ago

    Maybe  'I Will Find a Way.' 

    but you will know what best suits it,sometimes poetry gets
    re-named and even altered over time. Working titles often help you decide on the one you want eventually. I use them when the final title is for a time out of my grasp.

    or (this is an after thought)  - ' Love Will Find a Way.'

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    ralwusposted 5 years ago

    first four words of the first line; 'I Will Find You'

  7. thirdmillenium profile image72
    thirdmilleniumposted 5 years ago


  8. know one profile image61
    know oneposted 5 years ago


    That's my point of view on reading. ;-)

  9. leni sands profile image82
    leni sandsposted 5 years ago

    I agree with 2uesdays and Ralwus - I think the best title would either be 'I will find you' or 'Love will find a way' or you could go for something not included in the actual poem - like 'Love will break you down', Reeling into love' or something like that!  Good poem by the way.

  10. Greek One profile image79
    Greek Oneposted 5 years ago

    I think that the line "smallest open crack" taken from the 3rd stanza would get most Google search results if it was the title

  11. saleheensblog profile image59
    saleheensblogposted 5 years ago


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    Poet625posted 5 years ago

    oh yes..i would go with i will find a way to your heart