minakay - the sentiment is beautiful. If you're looking for critical assay, needs just a little tweaking on meter.
1. "What if the owl could manage a grin" fits the meter you have in the second line.
4. "By the fact that it couldn't fly worst of all not knowing why" - follows the meter of the first two lines in this stanza.
Just little things like that. I'm not sure if you wanted that type of assessment or just a thumbs up or down. By the look on your face in your avatar, I'd say you have already achieved the sentiment in this poem.
couturepopcafe, thank you so much. I am so grateful. U really gave me what I wanted exactly. Please could you go thru the other poems on my hubpage and let me have ur comments? @ Druid dude: Thank you too. You are awesome!