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Memories

  1. tonks814 profile image72
    tonks814posted 6 years ago

    Your face is like the vague memory of a bittersweet dream.
    A dream of a life I am sure I never lived.
    So foreign, your face looks to me now
    Like a familiar stranger
    Whose name I never caught.

    1. Anachrony profile image61
      Anachronyposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Brilliant, though I agree with frost. Bittersweet dream is a tad cliche. After reading the first line, I was like, "I know this!". But otherwise a great poem. Last line ended it well. big_smile

      Here's one for you, from me:

      title: Aged Distortion

      body:
      The guitar strings pluck away at the past.
      The drum beats bring the future to the mast.
      The chants bring the flame to it all.
      The words make the buildings fall.
      And throughout the music of all of this,
      The shore of your distortion is what I really miss.

      end:
      -Anachrony

  2. Jaggedfrost profile image84
    Jaggedfrostposted 6 years ago

    Is this here because it is too short for tos?  It is a nice little poem, the first line of direct metaphor isn't necessary and could be shortened but the rest of it is thought provoking.

    1. tonks814 profile image72
      tonks814posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      I'm really new to hubpages, what's tos?
      And, thanks for the feedback, I am bad at proofreading my own work. I'll play with it a bit.

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    BIKTMIAposted 6 years ago

    Being on different levels of life is hard
    some people are so happy
    others are sadd
    some have so much
    others are so poor
    I remember them all
    and know what it means
    Memories , life it took a long time
    to comprehend that

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    BIKTMIAposted 6 years ago

    A crazy mind

    Why  I will always do something to you,
    When I suffered my stroke , and could not
    speak because of your life messes inflicting my life
    with your power not in my control
    on purpose is why I will always
    do something to your attacks on my life the now
    that should prove to you ,life was quiet until
    you came with your disrespect, why I will
    always do something to you, because your place
    was not , to be a factor in my life a somebody
    a nobody does not know.  Why I will always
    do something to what ever you do pertaining to
    me .  I have piece and have shown you what matters
    to me and that does not include you.  Why I will always
    do something to you when you come with dispair.

  5. Jaggedfrost profile image84
    Jaggedfrostposted 6 years ago

    Adsense TOS refers to the nature of hubs that they consider mandatory to use it for adverting.  Hubpages uses those same standards give or take to judge the value of hubs in general once published.

    1. Glenn Raymond profile image61
      Glenn Raymondposted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Jaggedfrost,

      Thank you for that explanation, I've been curious.

      Tonks814, and Biktmia,

      Keep writing you have inner poets that want to be let out.  Mostly keep writing the content that sells.

      I remember the simple days when every piece of written work was typed up and snail mailed to the publisher.  I think this way is most handy and wonderful, but it is a lot to take in all at once.

      Cheers to you all.

 
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