Self explanation

  1. Mr.FantasyLand profile image59
    Mr.FantasyLandposted 5 years ago

    Can you see it from my side?
    Where all the emotions reside
    Of shock, hurt and pain
    Tears fall like drops of rain

    I give everything I have to any person I have feelings for
    This person I slowly came to adore
    Their was no intention to rush her
    Something else did occur

    The words that I read
    I couldn't believe what she said
    This has happened many times before
    How much more can this soul endure?

    Is my heart full of hate?
    Of words of anger to retaliate?
    The answer is no
    This feeling is what a very few know

    Now what am I supposed to do?
    I cannot stay sad and blue
    The poet must continue to the path
    To find the potential one and have the last laugh

    I will be there for her til the end
    My heart, thoughts and care to lend
    Feelings never go away
    They linger and forever stay

  2. Cagsil profile image84
    Cagsilposted 5 years ago

    The forums are not the place to be posting your poetry. Try writing a hub, so you can bring traffic to your work. Posting it in the forums is meaningless and defeats the actual purpose of the forums, as well, as the purpose of writing hubs.

    Just a thought.