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  1. lola123 profile image61
    lola123posted 5 years ago

    when i close my eyes,i only picture you constantly daydreaming of you and no one else.
    tried to shake you but the feelings always came back around like some type of an addicting boomarang.
    why is all i can think of i guess its something special about you that makes me attracted to you.
    maybe its your smooth brown eyes your sexy dimples your sexy brown skin or your breath taking voice.
    i really wanted to kiss your soft lips but i guess i never gave you a chance 'cause im too shy.


    dedicated to a good friend/excrush Dennis Raymond Jr. Miles

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      will345davisposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      That was beautiful.

    2. Extinct Soul profile image61
      Extinct Soulposted 5 years ago in reply to this

      Why did you chose to post it on the forums rather that making this one a hub?

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        lola123posted 5 years ago in reply to this

        extinxt soul i wasnt sure,can you give me some advice on it?
        thanks will345davis

        1. Extinct Soul profile image61
          Extinct Soulposted 5 years ago in reply to this

          The thought was already there, you just have to choose what poem structure you want to follow and that's it, you could already post it on the  >> Books, Literature, and Writing>Poems and Poetry section...smile

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    lola123posted 5 years ago

    thanks for the advice extinct soul,i will certainly think about it=><=

 
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