eternally untitled .....

  1. ahorseback profile image54
    ahorsebackposted 5 years ago

    Here is as good a place to begin....I don't
    require an answer
    Would you do it all all again
    pay the fiddler or watch the dancer

    In your alone.... do you ever wish
    for an impassioned touch
    Or the tracing of lips in darkness
    is it asking too much

    Why does a woman think she's alone
    in her needs and desires
    Why is it we let the flame burn down
    losing the heat of the fires

    One hug from stranger for you one
    flirt in the office for him
    Why is it the tally is equal
    as our fire continually grows dim

    I wonder ...I wonder... is it all just
    some evil illusion
    This love thing brings on.....
    until it's eventual conclusion

  2. hottiesexy profile image59
    hottiesexyposted 5 years ago

    NIce and i think you can do much more than you are doiung now som just keep up the good work.

  3. xkamronx profile image68
    xkamronxposted 5 years ago

    I loved it.