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  1. ammccree profile image60
    ammccreeposted 4 years ago

    She sits with back facing corner
    huddled with knees to chest
    Tears settle quietly
    finding cheek
    a place to rest
    Here she tries to hide
    The same place her mother chose to cry
    Where she'd swore she'd never be
    But cycles tend to continue indefinately...

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      foxygemposted 4 years ago in reply to this

      WOW so powerful..I feel the words and been here myself. x

    2. FreezeFrame34 profile image85
      FreezeFrame34posted 4 years ago in reply to this

      Very well done.  I like your style!

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    Website Examinerposted 4 years ago

    Quite moving and well-written. Welcome to HubPages!

  3. Browneesorchids profile image78
    Browneesorchidsposted 4 years ago

    This is very beautifully written. From the words you chose, to the way you chose to present them. I love it, very prose poetry-my favorite. I love imagery and being very pesonal. Keep them coming and never change your style.

  4. lorlie6 profile image82
    lorlie6posted 4 years ago

    Lovely, sorrowful images...welcome, ammccree

  5. Jaggedfrost profile image86
    Jaggedfrostposted 4 years ago

    Very nice and to the point. I have only to check whether you ever decided to make a hub of it as it should be although for that, it might be a tad short but who knows. A little explanation of its origin at the beginning and personal introduction and you may have something sensational here. You may have done all this and I may be shooting the breeze but I will know soon enough.

    I checked, no you haven't. i would like to see it though. Best of wishes.