Fragility - A Poem By S.


Trapped in a world

the product of my own bad decisions

judges laugh at me in derision

if life is a stage and we all play our part

I guess my life is a study in tragic art

but though I've stumbled and I've fell

I've picked my self up again

so you judges can all go straight to hell

sometimes I feel everyones out to try and break me

and God and my dog are the only ones who won't forsake me

I feel this life is a study in learning humility

a little delicate thing full of fragility

only fools think tommorow is forever

even though that can change any moment just like the weather

so those of you who deign to judge me

shove those judgments up your ass

because humans are as breakable as any glass.

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maven101 5 years ago from Northern Arizona

Voted this up for passion, not content...A rant-poem passionately expressed but poetically deficient...

I know, I know, I can shove my judgement up my ass...But if you put it out there, you have to be ready for criticism, good and bad... Tighten up the dialogue, use metaphor, and stay away from the contrived rhyming...But keep the passion...Larry

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

I think i know how you must feel, thank goodness bad day's pass.


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Poetic Fool 5 years ago

Christopher, the passion and angst in your poem is palpable and you did well expressing it. I think many of us have been there and can relate. Could be better? Sure, but so can mine and every other poem here on HubPages. Keep writing from you heart and your passion and you will do well. Voted up and interesting.

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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

This is another great poem by S. Tell S. I say hi! I had a good laugh at this because I have been there and I know how it feel. It just make me think back at my own experience. I vote up, beautiful and awesome! ^_^

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Christopher Dapo 5 years ago from Havelock, NC Author

i do these poems to express not to impress anyone but thanks critics anyway ha ha ha - S.

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Christopher Dapo 5 years ago from Havelock, NC Author

@Chanroth - Thank you for your encouragement! -S.

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