Where Did They Go

Where Did They Go - By Pat Gillem

There once was a man called Gil,

who had a sweat lodge on a hill.

Out by his fire, Gil would sit,

then go into, the lodge to sweat.

You could see his fire, far and wide,

along came Uncle Larry, to see who was inside.

He opened the flap, to see who was within,

Gil sitting in a cloud of steam, invited him in.

They talked and laughed, and steamed all day,

then Uncle Larry said, '' The time is getting away!''

" I have to go, My wife is making beans and muffins."

But neither one could reach the door, caused they steamed themselves to nothin!

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PADDYBOY60 4 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hi Tammyswallow

Thank you for your kind comment. I am always glad to hear from the people that read my corny stuff!


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

Very funny limerick. Now I will have a fear of steamrooms..lol!


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PADDYBOY60 4 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hi Frogyfish- Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment.


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frogyfish 4 years ago from Central United States of America

Is this what 'they' call a last line laugh? I did. So thanks, and glad to read more!


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PADDYBOY60 4 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Thank you James. I seem to carry on quite a bit. Lol. Nice to meet you too sir!


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James A Watkins 4 years ago from Chicago

Ha! That is funny. I very much enjoyed your little rhyme. I am well pleased to meet another southwest Michigander too. Carry on!


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PADDYBOY60 4 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Howdy Cyndi10 - I appreciate you stopping in.


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Cyndi10 4 years ago from Georgia

This is funny!!!


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PADDYBOY60 4 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hi MM - That would be tough! Lol. Always glad when you stop by.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

That's tough missing out on the beans and muffins!

Voted up and very funny!!

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