Haiku No Fear including Kanji Symbols

Haiku : No Fear

To live with no fear, can be quite a tall order for many people. There are so many forces acting against the individual that it can sometimes seem like a very hostile world.

Why this is so was a mystery to me for a very long time. Why do people allow these fears to creep in and control their lives?

As an exercise I wrote a Haiku poem many years ago, and I came up with the following.

This poem is accompanied by the Japanese Kanji Symbol, for no fear.

I had no idea when I wrote this, that it was so strongly identifiable with Bushido, the way or philosophy of the warrior. I had at that time read nothing of philosophy. I just felt it made sense.

This is the third version and final version of the haiku. It conforms to the traditional haiku format of 5-7-5

Burst forth in tears releasing

all fear... then you will be free

be what you can be

Butterfly

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Haiku means Actor

HAIKU Meaning: haiku, actor
HAIKU Meaning: haiku, actor | Source

No Fear Symbol

NO FEAR  The same symbol is used in Chinese and Korean.
NO FEAR The same symbol is used in Chinese and Korean. | Source

Haiku Poems

I wrote the above haiku poem on the 19th October 2011 amended 27th July 2012

I wrote the original haiku poem back in the summer of 1984. This is the first time it has been published or even written down since then. It was constructed like this below.

The term Kanji, can mean to feel or sense. The Kanji characters are represented on the right of this page.

I had no clue about poetry or haiku at the time. I really do not know much about it now.

I have read a lot of poetry and still find it a mystery.

The words below are in the original format.

Burst forth

in tears

releasing

all fear

I was studying at the City Literary Institute, Holborn in the middle of theater land; in London's West End.

It was one of the most incredible experiences of my life. I met some of the most amazing writers and teachers at that college.

I never new that education could be so much fun, or that teachers could be so incredibly good.

I owe those people so much. Thank you.

Now in comparing the two haiku poems. I feel my original 1984 version is more dynamic whereas following the method outlined above and below (traditional haiku form) makes the one I wrote today a little, I don't know what.

Same sentiment but somehow, something doesn't feel right.?

According to Wikipedia:-

haiku plural of hai·ku (Noun)

Noun:

  1. A Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five.
  2. Or 5 7 5 words per line.
  3. An English imitation of this.

In the strictest sense, neither of the above poems conform to the traditional form of haiku.

It is my first and only attempt to write a haiku, on the subject of no fear. I liked it.

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ignugent17 4 years ago

It is wonderful and thanks for explaining it to your readers. :-)


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hello Cyndi10,

That sounds like a wonderful idea. I may do it too and put it on Redbubble.com


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Cyndi10 4 years ago from Georgia

Indeed, powerful haiku about fear. I could reproduce the symbol for no fear and add your haiku underneath, attributed to you, of course. That would make a nice wall hanging to help us all face our challenges.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hello ishwaryaa22,

I too wrote many verses in my youth and I still have them.

Maybe we should both find them and put them on hubpages.

Haiku are quite tricky to write.

Shaving it down to the bare minimum is a difficult art indeed.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hello Vincent,

Thank you for your warm comments.

The year was 1984 and I had decided to return to full time education. With 3 young kids and a wife. It was a hard decision. I drove a taxi nights to keep us going.

It was a time, where I too shed many tears, and a lot of other people's crap that had been dropped on me. I foolishly, had continued to carry that around too.

When I wrote this Haiku. The English teacher who read it, saw something in me that I didn't see in myself.

Thankfully I persevered and discovered a whole new side to myself. There are good people in the world.

Thank you for reading this.


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ishwaryaa22 4 years ago from Chennai, India

A well-explained hub on haiku! As per my observation, haiku is recently the most popular form of poetry on HubPages. As a child, I wrote casual poems. Maybe in the near future, I will give poetry, particularly haiku a try. Your haiku is well-versed with a convincing message. Well-done!

Thanks for SHARING. Useful & Interesting. Voted up


Vincent Moore 4 years ago

I prefer this version

Burst forth in tears releasing

all fear then you will be free

be what you can be

Why? Because I feel, I shed those tears, I was then set free to be the man I could be, thus the poet I am today. These words mean much to me, however both versions are brilliant, well done my scribe.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hi Jen,

I really must try writing more of these haiku, they are quite tricky. Especially for someone as verbose as me. lol


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hi Vespawolf,

So glad you liked my attempts at haiku. There are some great writers on hubpages who produce incredible work.

'Have no fear' is a very Japanese idea from their philosophical concepts of Bushido. The warrior code.

I too prefer the second Haiku (the original) as it is more immediate. Stripped to the bone.

Thanks for reading and leaving your warm comment.


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vespawoolf 4 years ago from Peru, South America

I must admit that I've never tried haiku, but I found your dissection of this form of poetry very interesting. I enjoyed your first haiku, but when I read your second I have to agree that it's my favorite. I think it's something about the "flow". Voted up and shared!


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hi rebecca,

That makes two of us that have written just one haiku. Maybe we should form a club lol.

Going to read your one now.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hi Aurelio,

This is my one and only attempt at haiku. I like the original too. Straight to the point.


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rebeccamealey 4 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

Such a powerful message in just seventeen words! I like the way you added in the Haiku info. I have written just one Haiku in my life. It is on HP, called Bare Naked Nature. I tried my hand at Haiku because of all the cool ones that my followers inspired. Visit it when you get a chance and see what you think!


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alocsin 4 years ago from Orange County, CA

It's amazing what a little change in format will do. I think the second one forces you to contemplate the words more because they're broken into sets of two and forces you to stop. Voting this Up and Interesting. SHARED.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hi Alastar,

Thank you for your kind comments.

I truly had no idea that I was in such an august institution, until years after I had left it.

Then it dawned on me, where I had been trained. I was duly humbled to say the least.

I was just an idiot off the streets and somehow ended up in one of the most prestigious colleges in London.

Don't ask me how, I just got lucky I guess.

I met some of the best teachers in my life there. One was an American.

She was our vocal coach. She was in the movie. 'Alien'

I am very proud of her. She was the one who liked this Haiku!

How weird how life pans out?


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Alastar Packer 4 years ago from North Carolina

Molometer, your haiku entries here are contenders. They reminded of two things: the old slogan for the U.S.Army, "Be, all that you can be, in the army." And the other is the poems of your great genius poet John Keats. Both versions are powerful in their way. That's awesome to read of your enjoyable time at the City Literary Institute too my friend, those kind of experiences can make all the difference in the world.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hi cloudexplorer,

Glad you found this interesting. I can't believe it sometimes; that I carried this in my head for so many years and it wasn't until I found hubpages, that I actually wrote it out again.

Haiku's are cool as we have to be concise. That is the hard bit.


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

Hey there Molometer, this is a cool Haiku, I actually just tried to write one myself, about a month ago or so, and it turned out to be a success.

I think poems like this are truly cool, and both of yours I liked in a big way. I think its the creativity that goes behind it all, that makes it a cool thing to write. Voted up & getting pinned onto my Pinterest poetry collection, nice work!


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hi Vinaya Ghimire,

Glad you liked it. It took me a long time to get it written down. But I did it in the end.


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

I loved your wordplay with fear and tear. Thanks for sharing your good work.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

I added a brilliant video to this hub. Worth a look when you are feeling a little under the weather?

Truly we must count your blessings.


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Thank you Audrey. I carried that poem around in my head for so many years. My literature teacher at college way back loved it so much, It just stuck with me. I am glad you like it too.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

I loved this hub. I loved that you included the Kanji, but mostly, I loved your haiku--so well done!


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molometer 4 years ago Author

Hello starstream,

Can't wait to read them.

Glad you liked mine too.


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starstream 4 years ago from Northern California

I once tried to write a Haiku poem. I am going out to search my notebooks in the garage to locate it. Inspiring.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hi Robert,

Good on you. Give it a go and don't get hung up on the form, as long as you enjoy it and can manage to convey the meaning and spirit of the concept, or idea.

Go for it.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hi Sunnie,

Glad you liked and look forward to reading your versions of this poetic form.


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Robert Erich 5 years ago from California

Great post about Haikus. I've always seen them as fascinating and a bit difficult to write. You may have just inspired me to give writing one a shot.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

I have fallen in love with Haiku..I think it is amazing what one can say with so little words..it brings depth and meaning..Thank you for sharing your Haiku,

Blessings,

Sunnie


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homesteadbound 5 years ago from Texas

Don't hold your breath on it, but I will think about it for sure.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hi Cindy,

Well we are westerners and I guess my skills are weak in haiku writing.(and arthritic) There are rules... in 'Art'? :)

It does say 'an English imitation' of this form.

These are the only ones I have ever written.

There are great fun though.

Trying to convey a feeling or idea in as few words as possible.

I like 'em and may try some more myself.

I look forward to reading your first. Thanks for the dropping in and reading the hub.


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homesteadbound 5 years ago from Texas

I just might have to give Haiku a try one of these days. I just wrote mu first poem and published it during the contest. Maybe a Haiku is next. What is the difference in Haiku and the number of syllables you used in each one? Neither seems to follow the rules. Just curious.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Thank you soulunique and welcome back again.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hi Primpo, glad you liked it. I was about to answer you 2 weeks ago but the feed was so active I couldn't track your comment down.

I really just write everyday and usually I have something to publish.

I didn't realise that I had written so much until I saw the 30 hubs in 30 days thing and I had about 22 done already so I just wrote some more.

I have seen people much more prolific on hubpages. Some publish 20 in a couple of days. I assume they had them somewhere else and moved to hubpages.

I am not really concerned with the numbers though. I just want to get all this stuff down somewhere and hubpages suits me.

Must pop back over to your hubs too.


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soulunique 5 years ago from Peterborough

Molometer.. it just defines that Less is more. Love this!!!


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primpo 5 years ago from Ocean County New Jersey

alright, loved it, and how did you publish so much in such a short amount of time? I'm coming back to read more.. you gave me just what I needed to hear today, thank you.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hi pearldiver,

This was my first and last attempt at haiku writing and as I said I carried it around in my head for decades, so it definitely struck a chord with me.

I will give it more thought in the meantime here is something for you.

tread softly

on the rice paper

leave no trace.

Thanks for your visit and comments I will endeavor to persevere.


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Pearldiver 5 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

Good efforts first up in both... but do not limit talent with a singular stroke of the brush. True masters in this genre allow each dip of the brush to create far more than a singular haiku stroke. Test the quality of your brush; it was designed to last beyond a thousand strokes. It will not serve you faithfully if you do not appreciate the given value of any zen writer, by any idle brush.

Thanks for sharing.. I look forward to meeting your brush.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Thanks makusr your comments are clear and understood.


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makusr 5 years ago from India

molometer,

Greetings from MAKUSR. This genre is very difficult because you have to pack it all in in such a small place and make it look good and provide a good meaning. I hope you understand what MAKUSR wants to say and mean. This is very good. First one is quite good.

Lots of Love,

MAKUSR


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molometer 5 years ago Author

freedom that solitude brings

I am very happy

in my own company

Nuff said

lol


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

I don't miss the meetings and the corporate world. Loving the solitude of retirement, watching people now is more interesting than listening to as you say their gibberish. LoL and I agree all meetings should start and end in Haiku it would be a much more relaxing atmosphere for sure.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Thanks for dropping in saddlerider1, Haiku are very interesting to me.

I work in an profession where people talk in eduspeak it's just nonsense dressed up to make themselves appear smarter than they are.

I am a great believer in occam's razor or the economy or succinctness in speech after sitting through endless meetings where they go on and on talking gibberish.

All meetings should be conducted in Haiku. What do you think lol


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

I like them both, but the first is my preference. I love the compressed expressions conveyed in a few words, they can most certainly be very powerful. History has shown us so many styles and Haiku is right up there with some of the best.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Thank you mikeq107. Much appreciated.


mikeq107 5 years ago

Well you come from a small country that has made a big noise around the world....powerful words My friend!!!

Mike :0)


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molometer 5 years ago Author

LOL Hubertsvoice & Always you got me, well done.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

What's not to like? Loved it....


Hubertsvoice 5 years ago

You wre right about that


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Well thank you Sneha, I'm glad you like it.

I have been carrying it around in my head for decades and felt the hubbers would like it.

Thanks for your great comment.


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Sneha Sunny 5 years ago from India

Now that's an amazing work!! Conveys a true and useful message.... :-) The extension too is beautiful!! Love it!!


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hiya Moon lightened.

Thanks for dropping in and leaving such a thought provoking comment.

Glad you liked both versions.

I aim to please my fellow hubbers:)


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hiya phdast7,

I am going to stick with the original.

I think sometimes traditions need to be adaptable especially when it is cross cultural.

In this case Japanese to English is not it could be argued a natural fit.

The Japanese ideogram above Haiku = Action. In other words these words mean business.

In English most closely equates to a verb.

English requires more descriptive elements to deliver the verb punch. Therefore slowing down the pace of delivery.

I think the stripped our bare bones version is better.

My English Lecturer back 1984 said it hit the nail on the head and she advised me to remove the last letter off of fears reducing it to fear.

So tradition, what tradition? :)

Hope this may help you to have a go a one or two. I'd love to read them.


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Moon Lightened 5 years ago from Delhi, India

I enjoyed both versions. They both illustrate a different "you" of the time. There is just something about Haiku writing; trying to paint a powerful mood or image with so few words. Thanks for sharing.


phdast7 5 years ago

I agree with your own assessment. The 1984 version seems more powerful, although the recent version follows the traditional pattern. I have never been able to write Haiku myself, so I am a loss. I wish I had some helpful suggestion and I don't, but I like them both.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hi stories inc. thanks for the read and comments.

I will defer to the bard.

"Brevity is the soul of wit"

Hamlet, 1602


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Stories Inc. 5 years ago

I agree, very powerful and compressed. When you use a lot of one syllable words, they each sort of hamer in, but in a good way.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Thanks Hubersvoice, I appreciate your views and terrific comments. Cheers buddy.


Hubertsvoice 5 years ago

That is an awesome message. I honestly don't know what else to say other than awesome.


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molometer 5 years ago Author

Hi jenubouka, thank you for coming over.

When I think about it.

Some of the most powerful ideas are expressed briefly.

"let freedom ring"

"the pen is mightier than the sword"

to name but two.

Happy hopping and thanks again.


jenubouka 5 years ago

It is amazing how you can piece a small amount of words together to create a powerful message.

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