my greatest lover

you and i

existed in my darkest hour

it delivered me, for a moment

from the hell that i was in.

your touch...the feel of you

massaged my soul.

you would take me

anywhere and everywhere

and almost leave nothing left of me

i wanted you so badly

and you gave yourself to me

over

and over

and over again.

on the couch

in your bed

in the street

you filled me in ways

id never been filled before

creating a space inside

that hasn't been filled since

my legs part now

and beg for you

beckoning you

back to the moments

that made me so warm

so violently loud

so out of control

and i think of your hands

your kiss

pressed so deeply into mine

that it made me forget everything

but you

and my craving for you.

your hands gripping my thighs

your pressure making me arch back

and scream out your name

dripping with sweat

skin on fire

i never could get enough of you.

i could have kissed your mouth for hours

knowing what was coming

but savoring your soft lips

your arms around me

pulling me tighter

fighting to get even closer than possible.

never wanting to stop

my greatest lover. 

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xstatic 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

Whew!! That is a Hot Hub for sure! Beautifully sensual and dare I say climatictic! Well done.


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CM Sullivan 4 years ago from California

WOW. Intense.

So that's why girls arch their backs. ;)

Up, useful (lol) awesome, beautiful, very, very interesting.


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

lol thanx xstatic


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

ha! i love that you find it useful lmao. had a conversation with someone today that was in fact, the best lover that i ever had. the encounters were years ago, but they will stay with me forever.


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CM Sullivan 4 years ago from California

Must have been a good match, you two. But as I have usually found out the best matches physically have issues with just about everything else. The more intense the sex, the more you want to choke each other when you're not having it. LOL There is only like 1/10 of those intense relationships where you get both.


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

Lol, pretty sure you might b spot on about that one. Because the total opposite is amazingly true haha


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh.My.God. Hot damn. You certainly deliver! Just like that...snap!...short-circuited my one-track mind...and who will be pulling me out of this sensual flaming hot vortex now, huh?


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Angelme566 4 years ago

Wooo..this is so passionate ..you speak what i have spoken , you shouted what i screamed , you express my being a woman. I love this piece.

a woman is a woman

woman wants

woman needs

woman longs

woman wish

woman love

woman , a human being


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amithak50 4 years ago from India

Nice poem ..Thanks a lot


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

were more than human beings Angel, we are raw uncut individual beings just clawing to feel.


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

thanks for reading


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

Lust full indeed.


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epigramman 4 years ago

I have watched you grow and grow my dear Steph as a writer and you have long ago achieved perfection in this poetic art and this surely is a masterwork - wish I could write like this - you are my hero to be sure and a literary force to be reckoned with - and I am so very proud of you - lake erie time 11:10pm

Will post this to my (stupid -lol) music group at FB and let them know all about a great writer and such a masterpiece of writing like MY GREATEST LOVER.

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