i wanted to run

i wanted to run

Today the morning brought the sun,everybody said it will be fun,but i wanted to run.

I didn't like when mama and papa left for office as usual schedule,they say this is the way life has to be and this is the natures rule.

Over here everybody do some job with only a day in a week of leisure,but tell me is this the only pleasure.

why do we want money and not the perfection,can anybody give me some suggestion.

I know work is essential to earn your bread,but i wonder if in the end of your life you realize you shouldn't have done this job,won't it be sad.

Today i think i should run for perfection, god will give me the bread and no matter what happens i will do what i have said.

Now i will run for my goal,with my immortal soul.

Now i feel all right and the day is bringing the night.

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Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

This is cute. I love the words you picked for it.


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prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india) Author

Hello Phoebe ,i am glad that you liked the words.


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Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

the flow was authentic and it works for this write hit up and way awesome :) Frank


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yanachka 5 years ago from Dubai

This is a topic that is very close to my heart. I love how you put it into a poem. I have small kids and I need to work but I also dont want to leave them because I know they need me more than ever now. I am torn.


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prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india) Author

Don't worry you must divide your time between work and children so as to satisfy both,and god will help you,and nothing will intrude.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

A very beautiful hub and I like your style of writing.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Great poem. Love the flow and the symbolism. Take Care.


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prashant angiras 4 years ago from shimla(india) Author

Thank Eiddwen for your humble comment,i am sorry that i am responding to you after 7 months but all this time i was too busy and i didn't even visited hub pages.


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prashant angiras 4 years ago from shimla(india) Author

Thanks Carolinemd for dropping by and leaving your comment.Bye, take care.


shivangi sharma 4 years ago

all poems r really awsome n ga8....

was lovable during reading.... eu r a awsome poet... really gud jus keep going it....

wanna read ur next poem soon tc...


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prashant angiras 4 years ago from shimla(india) Author

Thanks Shivangi for your humble comment,i am sorry that i couldn't respond earlier,i had some hectic schedule.

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