What my Lover Said


Hold me like you will never let me go...

touch me like you have never touched anyone before

run your fingers through my hair

caress my lips with the sweet taste of your lips

kiss me with your passion as if you will never kiss me again

touch your fingers against my cheeks and lips...

let me feel the hotness of your breath against my neck.


take me where no one else has ever taken me before

let me feel the pleasures of your touch, your kiss, your caress...

bring me to passions never felt before...

tease me....excite me...please me.


take me with all your desire and passion

Lover...o sweet lover...take me again and again...

o my sweet sweet lover...

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jujubees 5 years ago from Rhode Island Author

thank you so much Movie Master.....I wasn't sure where I was taking this piece. I really had a hard time expressing my feelings in words....sometimes I get "stuck" and don't know where I am going with a piece....so I really appreciate your comment. I'm glad you could see/feel the passion... :-) much appreciated!!!!

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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

What terrific passion!


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