Betrayal: A Poem

My heart was stolen


My Father in Heaven said "Ask and it shall be given you..."

So I asked; "Give me a heart that knows no ill."

Then He said, "Stand up, walk on and be whole."

With my trembling knees and quivering legs, I struggle to stand up;

And start the first step;

The first short and weak step from a decade of debilitating hibernation.


My Father in Heaven saw my dilemma so He said, "Ask some more."

And again I asked, "Give me strength to carry on."

Then He said, "Inhale deep, feel your heart, and walk on."




Miraculously, my strength comes back;

And I walk on with vigor and a melody in my new heart;

I can now hear the melodious chirping of the swallows as they soar up the sky;

My heart is humming with the gushing of the wind as it lull the foliage;

With the rhythmic swooshing of the waves as they hit the beach;

My heart is singing praises to the Beauty and Magic that this Universe is meant to be.




Down the lane...


Down the lane we meet by the crossroad;

In the valley of my dreams.

Once again, you steal my new heart;

The new heart; the replacement of my stolen heart;

The new heart that knows no ill;

The new heart given to me by my Father in Heaven.


The angels sing


I should have taken back my heart from you;

But with you beside me my heart could still sing with the melody of the angels up high;

With you by my side, holding my delicate heart; my heart that knows no ill;

The whole universe is a paradise.

So I entrust my heart in your hands.

You gave my heart away


But one day when I wake up;

Tears fill my eyes for you gave my heart away to another...

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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Of course, thanks for dropping by MYWIKISTEP


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Of course, thanks for dropping by MYWIKISTEP


MYWIKISTEP 4 years ago

I liked this, Jynzly, except from the end:

we should awlays go on.

Another day, another time, another opportunity will follow....more and more will be there for us as long as we are positive.


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Sure...


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TENKAY 4 years ago from Philippines

I got a new hub. Check it out friendship.


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Everybody left...and now Greg is here...chatting...I go there after this...hope you would still be there.


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TENKAY 4 years ago from Philippines

Where are you? you said you'll visit us here in school.


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Hi My Friendship,

Welcome back to our "wonderful city"...ngiiii, how's Cebu City? I read you went to Bohol too...you will have many materials to write now huh?

The traitor?...who else do you think? That is always my feeling...just feeling betrayed...no need for concrete evidence...I just know...

By the I will visit you in school this morning after I get some grocery...coffee, sugar, etc.


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TENKAY 4 years ago from Philippines

Who is it this time my friend? I hope it's not Greg.


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Thank you cleaner3,

Yo are right. Thanks for dropping by


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Heartbreak is a strong emotion that can only be measured by words that we express. Only the one's who have had their heart broken know where the words come from, deep within. I feel you.

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