Order of Life

This narrative poem was written on June 29, 2001. It was the time when, like now, I was experiencing a major change in my life.


Order of Life


You keep running here and there;

You are not even chasing rainbows;

You run without a direction, you just spin 'round and 'round;

You fear your shadow;

It follows you wherever you are;

And so you run as fast as you can and as far can be;

You stumbled, collapsed then awaken only to continue running round' and 'round once more.

You run away again from your own shadow; wondering why it sticks with you

The one that you fear most.

You run to the broad light of day but you see nothing;

Except the monstrous shadow that the light creates;

You take shield in darkness for the shadow to disappear;

But the cold and chill paralyze your marrows;

Even your scream won't let out from your frozen throat;

Choked by the endless darkness in the night of your life.


The cares of life overwhelm you;

Anxiety grips your core;

Your mind is numbed and cloudy;

So you locked yourself into the darkest corner of your existence;

As you turn away from your truth; then you close your eyes in order to forget;


Oh feeble mind,

When will you come to terms with your self?

Don't you ever realize that the shadow has no essence and is powerless to destroy you?

Why are you hiding in that cloak and facade of retardation?

Shadows are there to announce the exact time of day;

And to urge you to move on to a sure destination.


Stop making them a monster;

Thus keeping you away from your unfolding truth;

Welcome the world of colors, shapes, clarity and natural beauty.

Stop running to and fro;

Think and be reasonable;What are your desires?

Know your self and start from there;

Accept your truth and let it unfold in its own phase;


Create the life you contemplate and focus on it;

Think. Think.Think.

Think on how you can achieve your dreams.

Look around and look good!

Look for the materials and tools to build your dream;

This world is in abundance to meet your every need. Just look and see;


Look up to your star;

Look up to the sun of your existence;

It gives you the brightest light that even the shadow cannot persist.

The energy from the sun makes everything possible for you; feel it, know it, embrace it;


The darkness is made for you to rest;

Sleep peacefully in the night;

And work joyfully during the day;

Only then could you have a balanced life;

If you follow the order that your life should be.

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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

SiberianWolf ,

I'm glad you see my hub that way. Thanks for reading. God Bless.


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Kamalesh050,

Thank you very much for the compliment. I appreciate your visit. God Bless.


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

catgypsy,

Thank you catgypsy for your encouraging comment. Each of us is awesome if we only prefer to focus on what is amazing within us.

God Bless.


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

catgypsy,

Thank you catgypsy for your encouraging comment. Each of us is awesome if we only prefer to focus on what is amazing within us.

God Bless.


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catgypsy 3 years ago from the South

I love this... can definitely identify with it. "Know yourself and start from there"...very wise advice. Beautiful piece of work, Jynzly.


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Kamalesh050,

Thank you very much for the compliment. I appreciate your visit. God Bless.


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

SiberianWolf ,

I'm glad you see my hub that way. Thanks for reading. God Bless.


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

SiberianWolf ,

I'm glad you see my hub that way. Thanks for reading. God Bless.


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

full of beauty and truth... a bright light in a dark world


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Hi LauraD093,

Thanks for reading my hub.

Every human have sometimes, if not often, been gripped with so much grief, sadness, broken hearts and to infinity of these types of depressing emotions due to circumstances surrounding them in a given time and stage in their lives. In fact statistics show that there are 32,000 suicides every year in the U.S. because they feel like they are in the dead end of their existence.

If only they hold on to life a little bit more time, they would realize shortly that everything passes by...and I mean everything...people, money, job, love ones, relationships, problems, circumstances...nothing is permanent.

So feel your sadness now...face it and accept it as part of your growth and development, as part of life, of living; then in your heart and mind see yourself in a different situation; see yourself in the light.

Thank you once more and God Bless.


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Jynzly 3 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Hi LauraD093,

Thanks for reading my hub.

Every human have sometimes, if not often, been gripped with so much grief, sadness, broken hearts and to infinity of these types of depressing emotions due to circumstances surrounding them in a given time and stage in their lives. In fact statistics show that there are 32,000 suicides every year in the U.S. because they feel like they are in the dead end of their existence.

If only they hold on to life a little bit more time, they would realize shortly that everything passes by...and I mean everything...people, money, job, love ones, relationships, problems, circumstances...nothing is permanent.

So feel your sadness now...face it and accept it as part of your growth and development, as part of life, of living; then in your heart and mind see yourself in a different situation; see yourself in the light.

Thank you once more and God Bless.


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LauraD093 3 years ago from Pittsburgh PA

This poem touched me very deeply I am at a juncture in my life were- ***The cares of life overwhelm you;

***Anxiety grips your core;

reading your work made me feel less alone and gives me some hope that this too shall pass ---thanks


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

janshares,

You're so kind janshares. Thank you for stopping by and for appreciating my hubs.

Yes, I am now one year in HubPages and still enjoying it.


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

janshares,

You're so kind janshares. Thank you for stopping by and for appreciating my hubs.

Yes, I am now one year in HubPages and still enjoying it.


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janshares 4 years ago from Washington, DC

This is powerful. I love the acknowledgement of darkness, the encouragement to move forward, then ending with using the darkness in a positive way. Voted up, awesome, beautiful. I stopped by to say Happy One Year Anniversary and to thank you for following me. You have great hubs.


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Thank you so much CloudExplorer; it's an honor to be approved by a veteran like you.


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City

Amazing loops, and leaps, and bounds this poem has, the shadowy appearance the endless flaw, and then the bursting into liveliness, I loved it. Wow

You poetry is superb, and very inspirational to say the least, I am surely going to become a fan of yours. Nice!! Voted up, getting pinned, liked, and G+ed.


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Jynzly 4 years ago from Marion, Indiana, USA Author

Kamalesh050,

Thank you very much for the compliment. I appreciate your visit. God Bless.


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Kamalesh050 4 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

There is a lot of depth in your poem. It is of very good standard indeed. Nice words, lovely flow all the way and so lovely to read. I look forward to reading some of your other hubs.

Take care. Best wishes to you my friend, Kamalesh

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