Letting Go of the Past

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All that pulls me back

The demons the horrors

As I look at the clock

It's all an illusion of a time before

Where things had rotted and pained to the core

Burying those times and forgetting the past

Will put me at ease and make me relax

If I don't let go they can drag me deeper

Into my death with the dark reaper

Through the dark clouds comes a beam of light

So bright but just a crack

That is my sight

It brings me hope so I can fight

Through the battle and I survive

Such joy lies ahead of me

In all different colors to see

Shooting through the sky like fireworks

Leaving behind a land of barren desert

What lies ahead is too great to see

Where things of fantasy lay to be

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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

that's the best word i ever read...hope...leaving behind the past and move forward to the future...


mathira 4 years ago

carolinemd21, your poem had such depth. Past is always a lesson and hope is always sunshine.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Great Caroline with these I see the message you are relaying and the direction you are heading. Burying the past for there is no answer within, you area live here in this present so let the quest begin.

It will see you through.

Bless.


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

I do often look back, Caroline, at events, people I've known and loved and hated (not too many hated) and for awhile mostaligia can reign, but I always come out of it and look again forward. Beautiful words, my friend.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

My mother told me and I am sure it's true . That a hurry bird never builds a great nest .

It meant to read . Great Caroline. With these words I see and understand the message you are relaying and the direction you are heading.

Burying the past ,

no answer lies therein

living in this present

so let that quest begin.

It will see you through.

Bless.

Do the honors with the above.


anonymous 4 years ago

Great poem! Always best to leave the past behind and look toward a brighter future.


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

That was wonderful, I almost feel like I was falling and then suddenly rose with hope. Thanks for sharing. :)


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Great poem! Always best to leave the past behind and look toward a brighter future.


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Wayne Brown 4 years ago from Texas

Some of my past feels like someone else lived it for me in some ways. It is the one aspect of my life that gives it longevity...trying to remember what the past was about. If we choose to hold on to the saddness, anger, and frustration which we have encounted along the way, it will eventually consume us because each one of those memories requires a given level of energy to be exerted to keep them alive...life is worth more than that. Our mental files should be restricted to very special moments which bring us great joy and pleasure...let the rest go as you so aptly state in this verse. Thanks much..voted up. WB


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful..Forgetting the past is very difficult, but just a tiny glimpse is a start..I can relate..Thank you..


The Writers Dog 4 years ago

The past can be too hard to forget sometimes. Thank you for a wonderful poem. Voted up.


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Perspycacious 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

"Tribulation worketh patience; And patience, experience; and experience, hope." (Romans 5: 3, 4) Under President Sukarno the Indonesian motto of the day was "Always onward; never looking back." A false concept, for we need to learn from that past in order to fashion a better future from our present. Good thoughts.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Raciniwa I agree with you. Thanks for reading.

@ Sky thank you my friend for all your kind words. Yes I am trying to live in the present and forget about the past. I like the lines that you wrote.

@ SubRon Thank you your comments always lift me up.

@ Anonymous I am glad you liked it. Yes it is best to move forward.

@ Cheryl thank you I'm glad you liked it.

@ Gypsy thank you for the comment!

@ Wayne thank you so much for your comment. I love how you said that it takes energy to keep those memories alive. I totally agree.

@ Always thanks for stopping by. Always a pleasure!

@ The Writers Dog thank you for stopping by and welcome to hubpages. :)


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Perspycacious great quote very thought provoking. Thank you for sharig and stopping by.


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Jspot 4 years ago from Flames of water and love

Tickle my eyes see my pain. Oh sorry. I am feeling a bit poetic after reading the depth of this light. Always the darkness making the light that much more. Although I do enjoy both, i live to love the light. Voted up and beautiful. Thank you Caroline


The Fastionista 4 years ago

A beautiful reminder that even when the shadows of the past haunt us, there is hope in the future. This is a perfect poem not just for the new year, but for the season - winter can be full of darkness but there's always the spring. Voted up and beautiful!


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Absolutely brilliant. Sometime a ray of hope is all we need to move on and leave behind that horrid past.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow how did I miss this.. so much to read.. LOL.. I had someone tell me THE PAST IS THE PAST LET IT GO. .. very wise daughter in law....i love how you ended this..What lies ahead is too great to see

Where things of fantasy lay to be.. excellent.

I voted up and awesome

Debbie


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hey JSpot thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you liked it.

The Fashionista thank you!

Senoritaa thank you for the kind words.

Deborah Yes she is very wise! Thanks for reading and stopping by!


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epigramman 4 years ago

.....sometimes it's hard to do - isn't it - let go of the past - and then sometimes when you get into the future you wish you were back in the past - lol - such is life - but as I always say - life goes on - no matter what so you either choose to go with it or get left behind - again, another provocative and soulful reading by you - I love when you probe and search in your writing - makes you the special person that you are - lake erie time ontario canada 3:09pm


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Epi thank you for the compliment! I totally agree with you on sometimes loving the great memories of the past and wanting to go back there. Too bad we just can't get rid of the bad and keep the good. :)


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

The past is past

Now it's just in our mind

these are now just memories

they are not hard to find.

when about them we think

Some are painful, some are sweet

Some are cold some are warm

and some bring the heat

Your poem is great

lets look to the future

for time and life go on

the love we must nurture


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Hi Cleaner nice to meet you and welcome to hubpages. Love the add on. Great work! Thanks for reading. I'll check out your page. :)


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

c21,

uummm neat-

"The past is the past , you can learn from it or run from it"

rafiki the wise old witchdoctor freind of kings pesent past and future

but sooo true

Th


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gmaoli 4 years ago from South Carolina

"Burying those times and forgetting the past

Will put me at ease and make me relax

If I don't let go they can drag me deeper

Into my death with the dark reaper"

I've struggled with letting the past slip away because of this very feeling, especially when it came to having to leave behind people who I thought were my real friends. The past is always there and one can never erase it completely, but there comes a point in time where you have to avoid looking back so much because it just drags you down to the point where you can't feel like you're living for the wonderful moments of today. Thanks very much for sharing this great piece.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Tom are you talking about Rafiki fron Lion KIng? lol. I totally agree with that statement. Thanks for reading and commenting.

@ Gmaoli Thanks for your comment. I have also dealt with leaving people behind that I thought were my friends. I totally agree that you need to leave the bad feelings that are existent in the past to move forward.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

C21,

guilty as charged...

"a sampa sanasquash bananna" he is my mystic african sae...

ive been using it for almost 2 years... your the first one to catch me... curses foiled again...

TH


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom You're too funny.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

c21, ya but looks shouldn't matter *hehe*

TH


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Debby Bruck 4 years ago

Dear Caroline ~ Best to let go of the past and not turn into a pillar of salty tears. Look forward, look ahead. Meditate on the present and all the blessings in your life now. Debby


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

LOL T.

Thank you Debby for the good advice and stopping and reading. :)

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