Color codes and contrast poem

By zigazou76
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Many Colors

When things don't seem to matter,

its life that gets shattered,

Situations may amplify,

conditions turned to critical,

some appear miserable,

that's when faith steps in,

when inspiring moments,

can save the day for most men.......


By zigazou76
By zigazou76 | Source

People get tested,

life turns restless

into a sort of stressed out mess,

Time ticks & things shift

games picked like flamed bricks,

High definition 3D shit

Faced with twisted bits,

or watching them torching new flicks

Trapped dots playing hop scotch,

pole dancing cops rotating around

on top of circular rocks,

Divisional plots collisional blocks

changing of the artificial crops........



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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

"pole dancing cops...." great line Mike! We all get tested, don't we....faith my friend...it's all about faith....in others...in God...in ourselves. Well, I have faith in you, buddy; you are one of the good people in my life. Thank you!


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City Author

Hey Bill, I unleashed this poem to see the reactions, and if they are good I will write many more poems like it.

I'm just trying to break down differing aspects of life at its seams using poetry, a bit here, just for the fun of it all, you know. After all its nonsense, LOL! Thanks for the cool comment.


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whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

Yes. life is like a puzzle and colorful patterns as in modern art, that show splashes of reds, blues and whites, together or apart, some are sensible and others take no care, in how they are arranged and in our despair. Words that rhyme and those that do not, can move us all quite a lot. So keep up the task by spreading the word, bring out your feelings, all to be heard. Nonsense, mine...nice work, Emrah.


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

I think you nailed this poem in a wonderful way.

Voted up,awesome and interesting, Joyce.


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City Author

@whonunuwho, thank you for your cool comment s quite thought provoking indeed, because life is full of many things indeed, nicely written.


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Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

You did good job writing this one. I really like the rhythm in all of the rhyming words.


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City Author

Thank you Writer20, I tried to make very little sense of it all, and to bring out whatever came to mind I guess, hope many other folks can enjoy my mind running loose here on hubpages, LOL.


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City Author

Thanks so much Ryem for showing me some hub love here, that was thoughtful of you to do, and I truly appreciate it. Nonsense poetry is what it does, right!


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flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

Distinctive quality, rare and a work of art in words which make this a very colorful poem.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Creative and clever - great writing!


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City Author

Thank you once again @Flashmakeit, your comments are always well taken, and very thoughtful.


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City Author

Hello @Movie Master, I'm so glad you think so, I been letting my poetry writers voice run off into many tangents recently, it feels so good to be free mentally that is, hehe!

Thanks for your cool comment here, it is much appreciated by me.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Fantastic video. Life tests us each and every day. Some days the colors are bright and the not so good ones they fade.


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CloudExplorer 4 years ago from New York City Author

Thank you again Gypsy, I'm at a loss for words now, you have stunned me here with all your hub loving support recently, you got me speechless. Wow!

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