My Life Story Part-2

Everything is fine
But I am not

I am very cool
But climate is hot

Sometime happy
Sometime sad

Sometime good
Sometime bad

People like to say
That go to hell

But i am used to think
everything is well

One day i felt
Is there anything wrong

Am I doing right
To keep this alog

Not able to decide
That what was wrong

So left that thing
and start singing a song

Comments 7 comments

ShallyD profile image

ShallyD 6 years ago from USA

hey !!!....finally u write your second poem.

great start and great going. I like your poem keep writing waiting for the sequel of "my life story"


pooja0908 profile image

pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

Thanks for encouragement shally but i think this one is not that much good.


ShallyD profile image

ShallyD 6 years ago from USA

no way this one is also good.....all u have to do is just elaborate more...


pooja0908 profile image

pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

ok i will try to do that


manomoney 6 years ago

its nice for soul searchers it shows that ur looking for something nice in life write some more


pooja0908 profile image

pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

Thanks for your deep analysis


MyValentine profile image

MyValentine 6 years ago

Your sadness is felt, but I like that you continue to sing. We do write our own life song:) Great job!

    Sign in or sign up and post using a HubPages Network account.

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    No HTML is allowed in comments, but URLs will be hyperlinked. Comments are not for promoting your articles or other sites.


    Click to Rate This Article
    working