nothing will ever be the same again

N

You tell me im a maze

and that im hard to read

but thats only

because your messing with me

ive never before

felt like everything made sense

ive never before

was so undone and undressed.....

you want to come by

but im in my head

as your trying to be

i feel so alone

god i hate that

but love just the same

that your trying to get there....

Just take me away, dont leave me here wanting..

im already there, but im sure you know that

just come grab my hand and well run from all this

just take me away and i promise you that

Ill meet you at night

in the sweet cold darkness

a touch of your hand

and a brush of my lips

i want more of you

but if thats all there is

you know ill take it...

 

And we could be

all things sweetly unheard of

that they dare not see

when the curtain goes down

Cause nothing makes me

want you more than this

than

the promise we made

etched in time long ago.......

You know ive been here

feeling sort of alone.............

why do you have to be so perfectly broken

why do you have to be the one thing thats missing

the kiss. the life. the breath ive been given. the chance to see. what could possibly happen. the thought. of you. lay asleep in my mind. the feelings we felt

are still

a l i v e.............

Just take me away, dont leave me here wanting

im already there, but im sure you know it

just come grab my hand and well run from all this

just take me away and i promise you that......

nothing will ever be the same again.

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bohica 6 years ago

A very compelling and beautiful poem!

Thank-you!


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the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

haha, your welcome!


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zzron 6 years ago from Houston, TX.

Very beautiful, it takes my breath away and sends my imagination soaring to undiscovered heights that fill my mind with raw unleashed passion. Longing for more, yes more of your unbridled desire for love as my heart trembles with anticipation.


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the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

zzron- i wont leave you dissapointed. excuse me while i stroke my muse for more...


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zzron 6 years ago from Houston, TX.

Ha ha, I have to say, muse is a new one on me, I'm from the south but it sounds like a really good thing to me. LOL. xoxo.


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the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

haha, look up muse on wikipedia...i dont want you to think im telling you about my twinkle time! lol, your the best zzron


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zzron 6 years ago from Houston, TX.

I Googled it, it's all good, your twinkle time is just for you. I try so hard not to have a dirty mind but sometimes it doesn't work. LOL. And you too are the best Pink.


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the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

zzron- no worries! if i didnt know what a muse was, i would swear what i wrote was intended to be dirty! lol. 27 today... i cant get over it.


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zzron 6 years ago from Houston, TX.

Wow, Happy Birthday, I just turned 49 in July and I don't feel any different than when I was 18. I will say good night for now OK. Have a wonderful and safe birthday :)


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epigramman 6 years ago

In my pj pants I smell the fresh cut grass

and I drink iced tea on my lovely ass

in New Jersey, California and Kansas too.

I am a time traveler from 1408

and pink is the color which makes me great

during the early evening with a bay breeze

so curb your enthusiam if you please

because I need total calmness and Irish sping in a man

so if you're a ghost of Ryan Reynolds then I think we can!


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the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

epigramman...i do have a lovely ass, dont i? lol. muah!


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epigramman 6 years ago

..me just wrote a good one from my lovely ass - The Urge (and how to deal with it)


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

This was a fun read, thank you!!!


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Cagsil 6 years ago from USA or America

This was definitely interesting to read. You touch on a deep feeling in this one, which is always a place I can relate. As always, a pleasure to read your writing. :) :D

Sorry, this one was marked as beautiful this time. :P


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puresilence 6 years ago from New Delhi

Beautiful.. beautiful.. I mean poem is really beautiful. Stepahanie, I don't have words to describe in more details, sorry for that. Keep penning.


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Docmo 5 years ago from UK

This is intense and honest and beautifully crafted. Once again, Pink you know how to harness and express those true emotions.


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Hmmm

Romantic, interesting, and I can relate

You tell me im a maze

and that im hard to read

but thats only

because your messing with me

That is exactly how I feel, so often

Now I have another writer to spend oodles of time reading their poems


Johnny Love 5 years ago

I had my Love tell me once that I was the missing puzzle piece to complete her. Still to this day my heart cries for the lovely heart I fell into. This reminds me of a love so perfect it is less than, more than, equal to and beyond. So much of nothing meaning everything. What a beautiful piece Steph. Beautiful.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

i havnt read this in about 6 months. thank you johnny love.


Johnny Love 5 years ago

hope all is well on your side of the shadows keep.


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the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

well its half past midnight. 6 minutes after dead time to be exact and im wide awake. could have something to do with the icing i made tonight. way too sweet.


Johnny Love 5 years ago

Hanging on for just another moment to find all you were searching for was in front of your eyes. Sun burning. Wheels turning. time fading as everything else dies.


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suziecat7 5 years ago from Asheville, NC

Great imagery. Honest poem. I'm a fan.


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jeyaramd 4 years ago from Mississauga, Ontario

Thats a beautifully expressed poem. often times when we are in love; we feel as though we are letting ourselves go. That we are allowing another to become one with our mind. Its a difficult thing as we are accustomed to our solitude in our own mind. Thats the beauty of it. Its awesome that you had experienced this to write it. I think we are fortunate that way to have truly loved. Thanks for sharing. A wonderful poem. Voted up.


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Love , love, love! =) The comments are priceless, too!


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

BeyondMax- yea lol, the comments are always more of a conversation in my hubworld lol

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