Poems That Tickle My Feet X --- Hide And Seek

Hide And Seek - By Pat Gillem

One day we were playing hide and seek,and I needed a place to hide,
I climbed a majestic mountain, and fell down the other side.
I tumbled down the mountain , right over a very high ridge,
and waved hello to some people, as I flew right over a bridge.
I kept falling down the mountain, and was having a wonderful flight,
when I finally hit the bottom, and landed in the middle of a fight.
Two Mountain Rams were squaring off, to slam their heads together,
they just had one thing on their minds, and it wasn't about the weather.
I got up and smiled at them, and said, '' Good day, I really have to run,''
because being hit by one of them, was not going to be any fun.
I have learned that life's lessons ,sometimes can be very hard,
when you are playing hide and seek, you might want to stay in the yard!

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PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hello shea duane. I love doing these poems and making people laugh. Thanks for the nice comment.


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shea duane 5 years ago from new jersey

You are so funny and I love the rhythm of your poems!

great hub


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PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

HI Rosemary. Pretty cool eh! Lol. Thanks for your comment.


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

I loved the way you casually waved hello to some people, as you flew right over a bridge.

A fun read


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PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hi Gus. I am glad you like my poem. thanks for your comments.

Hello Sandyspider, thanks for stopping by.


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GusTheRedneck 5 years ago from USA

Howdy Patrick (Paddyboy) - The nice thing about folks who like to write poems (such as you...) is that they are seeking while never hiding. Fun poem, this one.

Gus :-)))


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Sandyspider 5 years ago from Wisconsin, USA

Thanks for sharing.


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PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hello SheilaKay. These poems just kind of bounce out of my head. Thanks.


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PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hi wildlove5. Thank you for your comment. Poetry that rhymes seems to make it more fun.


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PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

Hello Wrath Warbone. I am glad that I could cheer you up, because that makes my day.


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Wrath Warbone 5 years ago from Cleveland, Ohio

Thanks. That cheered me up a lot!


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wildove5 5 years ago from Cumberland, R.I.

i love rhyming poetry! Congrats on number 10!


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SheliaKay 5 years ago from Marietta, Ohio..... but born and raised in Northern Ohio on Lake Erie

I love it, it's a fun poem to read. The title alone grabbed my attention from the beginning


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PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan Author

This is my tenth hub! Yip yip yip hooray!

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