Oh Tears... :: A Poem


A painful dialogue with tears. This poem was among the first few that I wrote in Oct 1998.

"Oh Tears...

  Your rolling sadly down my cheeks

  Tears mercilessly, my heart to pieces,

  Listens only to sympathetic voices,

  Created imbalance in my personality

  Arouses in friends - a great curiosity

  Makes my life very intolerable

  As if its not worth livable...

  A sob, a sniff, a weep and cries

  Your unwelcome existence shoos off smiles

  Oh tears...

  Your rolling sadly down my cheeks..."

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Lakshmi Murukesh 6 years ago from Kollam


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sonia05 6 years ago from india

very nice!

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BDhire 5 years ago

good one....

"I will cry when its raining........."

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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork

Crying help clean the soul,

nice post

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epigramman 5 years ago

...well I've cried a lot in the past year - probably more so than at any time in my life - so I can definitely relate to these words - again, so well put together by you and of course beautifully crafted too!

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DilaraMawlaMonzur 5 years ago

Really nice!

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aware 4 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.


i like the way you write.

i stumbled upon you.

for this i feel better.

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cloudy_cool 4 years ago from London, UK Author

Well thats a very encouraging comment aware :)


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cloudy_cool 4 years ago from London, UK Author

Lakshmi dear, thank you for being such a great friend!

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