Revenge, Inc. Part 15: A Short Story

Author's Note:

Hello everyone and welcome back. For the third straight week, I'm late in publishing another installment. Just to let you know, each of these installments are not easy to write and I highly suggest that NONE of you try it, as I usually write these within forty-eight hours upon publication! The other one-hundred and twenty hours is spent contemplating just one simple question: "What happens next?" I tossed and turned with this one and in the end, came up with the necessities of what needs to be established before this story finally does come to a close. I sure do hope that you like this segment and hope that you enjoy it as much as I did while writing it. I'd like to thank my good friend Useful Knowledge for supplying the "premise" for writing this particular installment. As always, I thank all of you for reading this and following this series. I really do appreciate it.

-ODP

Now, if you have not already, please read the preceding installments of Revenge, Inc. beginning of course with Part 1. Thank you again.

Revenge, Inc. Part 1

Revenge, Inc. Part 2

Revenge, Inc. Part 3

Revenge, Inc. Part 4

Revenge, Inc. Part 5

Revenge, Inc. Part 6

Revenge, Inc. Part 7

Revenge, Inc. Part 8

Revenge, Inc. Part 9

Revenge, Inc. Part 10

Revenge, Inc. Part 11

Revenge, Inc. Part 12

Revenge, Inc. Part 13

Revenge, Inc. Part 14

Two Kinds of People

Looking back while looking out from the stern of the Kigero, I watched JiraiIsland as it faded from view along with the oncoming darkness. For miles and miles around us, there was nothing by dark, peaceful sea. If was difficult to tell exactly where the rising smoke of ashes ended and where the sky began. As I stood there, leaning against the railing, Natsumi came out to join me, albeit very quietly. She slowly slid her fingers through mine without saying a word. For a moment in silence we held each other’s hands while taking in the view as the wind fluttered around us in a calm serenity. I then became hesitant and suddenly aware of where I was and what I was doing.

“Katsuro,” I said. She shook her head.

“He’s fast asleep as all of us should be. All three of us have not slept for almost two days now—you realize that don’t you?” I smiled.

“Would you like to sleep with me?” She looked out in the direction of Jirai Island.

“You know that’s not possible Cody…Or is it Marak now?”

“I guess it all depends on how I feel.”

“Can you really live the life of two different people, Cody?”

“All of us do you and you know that. Each side compliments and contradicts the other and in doing so, creates balance.” Natsumi smiled.

“Did my father teach you that?”

“No, it’s just an observation…Do you prefer me as Cody or Marak?”

“Don’t ask questions you already know the answers to, gai jin.” I laughed and she joined in. It was the first time either of us did so in recent memory.

“Did you learn that from your brother?”

She became quiet and let go of my hand. And maybe it was best that she did, as my hands were getting a bit clammy. At first I thought she simply no longer wanted at all to be intimate. But instead of backing away from me, she moved closer to me and placed her arms around me. Never had I ever thought that the smell of a woman’s sweat to be sexy. She then pushed my hair to the side so she could better see my eyes and I could better see hers. I was immediately surprised by the firmness of her breasts against my torso. I felt an immediate sensation, a pleasant sensation wash over me. She wrapped her arms around my neck and wrapped mine around her impossibly narrow waist and in doing so, we pulled one another closer and tighter. I then moved in for the kill. Every thing was fine up until my hands slid down to her buttocks and squeezed.

“Don’t” Natsumi said, taking a step backwards. “I already told you that we can’t.”

“You know, I was afraid that this was going to happen, yet went on with it anyway.” I then turned away from her and went back to looking out at Jirai Island, just before Natsumi found me that night, but while searching for it, I couldn’t locate it. Jirai Island was gone. It was too dark to see it any case. I couldn’t bear to look at her.

“You think I don’t want to Cody? I do, just as much as you.” I remained quiet. After a time, she then took to my side and placed an arm around my waist and rested her head upon my shoulder and there it stayed for a long time.

The Temple of the Golden Pavilion
The Temple of the Golden Pavilion

American Rock Star

The day before we reached Kyoto, I was anxious to finally touch dry land. I actually was looking forward to seeing a TV set and other signs of technology and civilization. Kyoto was the perfect mix of old and new. It was once the home of the Emperor of Japan and is still to this day is highly esteemed, regaled in excellence. Natsumi brought over a guitar case and placed it on the floor.

“This is for you, Cody.” I didn’t understand.

“What’s this for?”

“It’s for our katanas. You can’t walk around Kyoto carrying a katana for all to see. In case you didn’t know, this isn’t colonial Japan anymore. Besides, ninjas aren’t supposed to exist.”

“But won’t people stare at me and get suspicious of me carrying this case around?”

“I doubt that. Maybe you’re a musician. No one in Kyoto will question an American who’s carrying around a guitar case. They think all American’s like rock music and know how to play a guitar anyway.”

“Is that a stereotype?” Natsumi smiled.

“Yes.”

Paying Back A Favor

After having docked the Kigero, Natsumi and I followed Katsuro to a rundown building in the downtown district Kyoto on foot. There were many street vendors all along the bustling street. It seemed that each vendor was selling a variety of foods like Yakatori and Udon noodles in which you slurped to pay tribute to a chef. The aroma was inviting. I thought to stop by the closest vendor and purchase some but then realized that I neither had any money, let alone Japanese yen, as two years had passed since I purchased anything. You simply didn’t need money on JiraiIsland. I was getting many looks by passersby who first looked first at my face, then at my guitar case, and then at who I was with, especially Natsumi which was understandable. Natsumi scolded one guy who stared a bit too long. I think she told him to Fuck off in Japanese. It wasn’t any phrase Master Akira taught me. Katsuro stopped in front of one building while checking the address on a piece of yellowed-paper.

“Wait here,” Katsuro said to the both of us and then ran inside.

“What’s he up to?” I asked Natsumi.

“He’s finding us a place to stay for the night.” Natsumi then turned to look at me for a moment and then turned away and smiled. She then looked out into the street.

“What is it?” She shook her head.

“Nothing. It’s just that there are many favors that people owe us in Kyoto, did you know that?”

“Really? In what way?”

“C’mon, Cody. You should know better than that. In all fairness, some of these people owe us their lives.”

“So a place to spend the night is not asking for too much.”

“No, I don’t think so.”

Toji Pagoda in Kyoto
Toji Pagoda in Kyoto

Quality Time

Katsuro then reappeared from the building and gave us a nod. We went inside and followed a buff Japanese guy who was wearing sunglasses and a bomber jacket with a Japanese Naval Ensign on the back, much the same design of the Karate Kid’s head band.

“This is Kenji. He can be trusted.” And as if to cement this notion, Kenji gave us a bow and then proceeded by leading us upstairs while carrying Katsuro’s large duffel bag. Apparently, there was no elevator to speak of. In truth, I didn’t think such an old building could support one. Natsumi turned around and looked at Katsuro who was making his way out of the building.

“And where are you going?” She asked him. There was the sound of unmistakable concern in her voice.

“There is some information I need get. If you need anything, Kenji will assist you.”

“He does mean anything,” Kenji reassured her.

“And stop worrying, Natsumi. Everything is fine.” He then gave me a look and then left us with Kenji.

When we got to the second floor landing, Kenji opened a door and we went inside. Although the apartment wasn’t what you’d call a dump, it was far from being a palace quarter, mainly due to its cramped space. There was a living room/kitchen area and enough windows in which to see out into the busy street. Knowing, Katsuro, I was certain that he requested a room with such a view. Kenji then placed Katsuro’s bag inside one of the two bedrooms and turned to Natsumi, saying,

“In the kitchen you will find plenty of food and in the bathroom you’ll find everything is well-stocked. Should you need anything else, please do not hesitate.”

“Thank you,” she said. “You have been very helpful.” Kenji then gave her a nod and left the two of us alone.

I then closed the door and was driving the bolt home when Natsumi pushed me against the door with a thud. I felt a soft bare hand slide inside my pants, which no longer fit like they used to, and then felt the sensation like I was falling. A second thud and then there was the sound rapid footsteps followed by a rapping at the door.

“Is everything all right in there?” Kenji called from behind two and a half inches of wood.

“Yes, everything’s fine!” Natsumi said after coming up for air. She sounded almost convincing enough. I already had her blouse open and was looking to unclasp her bra. When was the last time you did this? I thought. Still, Natsumi’s hand was probing around my downtown area. I wasn’t sure just how long I could hold out.

Are you sure? It sounded like there’s some trouble inside! Do you want me to come in?”

“Goddamn it,” I said after a few tries and without much luck.

“No, no, everything is fine, Kenji. Thank you for your help!” Natsumi then batted my hand away and undid her bra without any trouble. I immediately went for her nipples and began feeding. I then began to make my way downwards and was enjoying the entire trip when suddenly, Natsumi’s head jerked back and banged against the door again. The sound was much louder than before.

“What? What was that?” Kenji asked again. Natsumi let out a gasp and then another. “Is everything all right?” Kenji was banging on the door yet again. Natsumi then took me by my hand and began to lead me towards the bedroom. Still, Kenji continued banging on the door. After her and I got half way down the hall, I stopped and retracted my hand and began marching back the way we came. Natsumi gave me a look of disappointment.

“Where are you going?” She asked.

“This fucking guy is clueless…Hold on.” I then walked back to the door and opened it up nice and wide. By this point I was completely butt-naked, with the exception of my socks. Kenji was staring straight at me. I placed both my hands on my hips and said,

“We’re really busy right now! Can you come back another time?”

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Kiyomizu-dera and Kyoto at Night
Kiyomizu-dera and Kyoto at Night

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Jesse-James 6 years ago

I spent a good while reading these and I loved it. I really did most books I can find a lot of flaws with and yes I have asked myself the question of "what happens next" a trillion and a half times as well as why. Though I love that you were able to truly express so much in so little. Never disappointing to read your hubs. Awesome work.


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

That really is good to hear, J.J. I was wondering whether or not you were reading this. It really does mean a lot, as writing this (as you know) is one of the most difficult challenges I've ever taken on. The psyche of a writer is nothing short of eccentric and to hear such great comments is my impetus to finish. I do my best to write very little and at the same time, "say" a lot. Thanks again, bro. I appreciate it.


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juneaukid 6 years ago from Denver, Colorado

Your descriptions of the street scenes in Kyoto made me homesick for Japan! I enjoyed reading your action-filled plot as well.


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Ha! Thanks, juneaukid! Who doesn't like yakatori and udon? One day I will get to visit. You are a very lucky man to have traveled to so many places...One day, right?


Keira7 6 years ago

Hello my dear good friend, I admire you a lot for writing a brilliant part every week.

Don`t worry we can wait, I certainly can, take your time. :) I agree with Jesse, we are never disapointing. I have to say a big Bravo to you.

I dont know if I have ready say to you, that, but I dont really come to HP a lot, if I do come its mostly to read your hubs. I am a big fan. Anyway I really enjoyed the journey as always. Thanks for all your effort. You are one of the best here. :) Bless you bro.:D


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Tatjana-Mihaela 6 years ago from Zadar, CROATIA

Well, Dohn, this is really interesting: you do not have whole story in your head, you are just imagining every week what could happen next. Brilliant. Thumbs up.


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Pamela99 6 years ago from United States

dohn, This chapter was splendid. You could sense the emotions of the characters and it was well written. I wonder how it will end?


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wavegirl22 6 years ago from New York, NY

you know i havent commented on any of this series yet....cause I have been printing them out to read as a book . .figure I am going to need something to do when football season is over. . but just so you know I have them all tidy in this pretty folder and I am getting excited to finally begin it, , ,


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

@Keira7-I am absolutely stunned that you said that, Keira! Thank you so much. I'm flattered by your response. It means so much that you do that. I'm honored, my friend. Ever and always, I look forward to hearing from you again (you belly dancer you) :D

@Tatjana-Mihaela-Yes, even I am not sure where the story will go. I must admit that by Part 4 or 5, I finally realized how this story would end...I just wasn't sure how I was going to get there. However, I'm beginning to see things much more clearly and so am trying to establish all of the scenes without having to drag on (I had having my time wasted while reading a book in that sense). Thank you so much, Tatajana-Mihaela! Until next time?

@Pamela99-Thank you again, Pamela. I do know how it will end and all things will come to those who wait :) I just hope that you and everyone else likes it!

@wavegirl22-You know, I was wondering about that, Shari. I remember you commenting on one of them but didn't return...Until now :) It's wonderful to hear that you're printing this out. My buddy apricot is doing the exact same thing with "I, Fraternity." She curls up on the sofa with her hot cocoa to read it each time (Yeah, I know, I got a lot of stories to share with all of you guys). You better give me your feedback! You know us writers are needy like that!


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emievil 6 years ago from Philippines

Hmmmm, didn't quite expect the story to go this way :). I had to laugh at what Cody did in the end of this chapter. Wonder what will happen if Katsuro finds out about his sister and Cody? :) Great installment, as always, dohn. And hey, you're nearing 800 fans!!!!!!


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Like I said once before between Cody and Natsumi doing the dirty deed--it's necessary. All work and no play makes, er, Cody a dull boy! I'm happy to hear that you liked it.

800 fans...How are we with your prediction (what does your crystal ball say? LOL).


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Oh, by the way, Emie, thank you for coming here "on time." I know you've been wondering why you didn't get notification of it being published the past couple of times :) As far as Katsuro is concerned...Tune in next time and the time after that!


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US

hi Dohn, sorry was late in reading this one, I was out of TV and internet for the last 24 hours and I was thinking about this installment, I am always waiting for installment of this story and I almost could feel the hunger should I say between Marak and Natsumi, ( I like their names, that way), and a taste of Kyoto, wonderful, and the unfolding story in the center of Japan, Kyoto. The feelings of Marak when leaving the place Jirai island is affecting emotions, a sense of relief and sadness, sweet indeed, touching emotions too.

Thanks Dohn, my wait for the installment is rewarded as usual, you are definitely a good writer, Maita


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

No apologies! I knew that I'd see/hear from you soon. Wow, Maita, nevermind TV, but no internet for 24 hours would drive me bonkers, lol. I think that during the editing process of this work, I'm going to expand some of the scenery (truth be told, there's a few things I would like to expand in this story).

I'm so happy to hear that you're still enjoying this. The amount of time that goes into each installment is trying, but it's certainly worth my effort. To read the responses is enough for me to keep going!

Thank you so much, Maita!


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cojaqmarketing 6 years ago from Carmel, Indiana

You sure are good at making sure that I spend a lot of time not 'working'!! Haha...thanks Dohn.

Jeremy


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thanks Jeremy! All work and no play makes all of us dull boys :D


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dave272727 6 years ago from Kentucky

As usual this installment does not disappoint. I am anxious to find out Katsuro's reaction when he finds out that his sister slept with a foreigner. As always, exceptional work my friend.


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Tammy Lochmann 6 years ago

Hi You are the hardest working writer I know. I am really enjoying your series.


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Philipo 6 years ago from Nigeria

Thanks for sharing.


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Lady_E 6 years ago from London, UK

Phew... There was steam coming out of my laptop while reading this one. I wish Kenji would just put 2 and 2 together. lol.

A very enjoying read. What I also liked about this, was the way you titled the paragraphs. It sort of gave us a clue of what was to come so we could settle easily into the story.

Thanks for sharing this lovely story. :)


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

@dave272727-Thanks, Dave, and yes, that remains to be seen! Rest assured, I thought well of that already. Onto Part 16? Thanks, my friend.

@Tammy Lochmann-Thank you so much, Tammy. I hope the day doesn't come where I have to stop writing this series because I'm stumped. It's great to hear such wonder comments. I really do appreciate it!

@Philipo-You're welcome, Philipo!

@Lady_E-Ha! That's great to hear. I thought it be fun to have the two of them hook up while away from the watchful eyes of Katsuro, even if it is for just a little while. About the heading for each of the paragraphs--that's has more to do with organizing my thoughts (as a target to write about) rather than to help the writer! How funny is that? Thanks again! xox


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prettydarkhorse 6 years ago from US

Hey Dohn, yes my internet is back now since yesterday, but no TV yes, I managed to watch the football though yesterday and ( I have a TV now, I went to buy new one, need a man to fix that, hehehe, but it is tucked away now,) I came here to congratulate you, the JETS are simply awesome yesterday,

and Did I told you about the pics here of nice images here (Golden Pavillion)and Kyoto at night, awesome pics, I went to Japan and lost all the pictures as well as in Bangkok, but I will write a hub when I have time, Thank you Dohn, Maita


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A.I.D.Y 6 years ago from Current

Dohn-this is like a great novel I just cannot put down. Japan is one of my places of all time I want to visit and live. You brought this desire more so to the top of my list! Beautiful images--they facilitate the ride into your fantastic Revenge Inc. series =D


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

@prettydarkhorse-That's great to hear that you finally got your TV back as it's just in time for the second round of the playoffs! Yeah, I'm rooting for the Jets now, as the Giants played like a bunch of chumps the second half of the season (pretty much). Yeah, I er, BORROWED those pics from Wikipedia, as they are part of public domain. I would love to visit Japan one day (probably after I publish?) but it would definitely have to be after I visit Laos! Thanks, Maita. I'm glad you liked them :)

@AIDY-Thank you so much, buddy. This is without a doubt shaping up to become a novel as I surpassed the novella qualifications about a month ago :) I can't tell you how much I appreciate your following this. Thank you!


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RedElf 6 years ago from Canada

Congratulations on 800 fans, and on this new chapter - I really enjoyed this episode!


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thank you RedElf, not only for reading this, but for congratulating me. It came much sooner than I thought it would. I'm glad that you enjoyed this :)


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Shalini Kagal 6 years ago from India

Dohn - the excitement is building up so wonderfully. Thanks for another super episode. And like the others said, the pictures you've chosen are just perfect!


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thanks, Shalini. Although I've not been to Kyoto yet, I'd loved to after learning so much about it. It's always good to see and hear from you!


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Shalini Kagal 6 years ago from India

Hey - congrats on those 800 followers - so glad I'm 'following' you and your story :)


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

No one is more surprised by so many fans as I am! Isn't it great that we can "follow" each other? LOL.


arshumum 6 years ago

Again you bumped with new chapter, so well, i have read all the previous one


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thanks, arshumum. I'm happy to see that you're following this series.


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Paradise7 6 years ago from Upstate New York

Terrific Dohn, you pulled it off AGAIN!


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Ha! Thanks, Paradise7! I really have more lives than a cat :D I hope that I can keep it going.


ralwus 6 years ago

Lovely pictures dohn. I love how you ended this. You are quite the story teller and this has been written into a masterful piece of work I must say. Kudos! Peace, CC


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thank you so much, Charles! I find that I still have much to learn, but that the story first and foremost is and always will be king. You guys need to stop making me blush :D


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Truth From Truth 6 years ago from Michigan

Great work Dohn, you really showed your versatility in this segment. Great writing as always. I also enjoyed the pictures.


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thank you, TFT. I'm glad you liked it! Kyoto looks awesome doesn't it?


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myownworld 6 years ago from uk

Oh..I wisssssh this was a whole book and I could just read it all without having to stop in the middle! I vowed to myself not to read anymore till you'd finished it, but here i am again! Brilliant! Keep going... and congrats on making 800+ fans! You so deserve them...x


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thank you, MOW! It will be soon enough, I promise. I think that there are several Hubbers and other readers outside of HubPages doing much the same thing (and yes, a couple of them get curious enough to come on over to check out my installments in order to get an update!). Thank you so much for the kind words! xox


Justine76 6 years ago

I am dying laughing...first off, 'downtown area' always makes me laugh....then, 'we realy are quite busy'....HAHAHA!!!!! Too funny. Great job, this one did remind me of Stephen King again, the way you perfectly added the 'gettin busy' into the stress and loss, and without being crude. Great job!


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Thanks, DM. I always pitched you as a fan of Stephen King. I read almost every book by him (at last count I read 34 books by him). This scene was due as I really wanted to showcase a, um, intimate scene between Cody and Natsumi. I'm glad that you liked it (I think that this is the first steamy scene I ever attempted). Thanks again!


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Cris A 6 years ago from Manila, Philippines

I hate it when I'm at the mercy of someone else's time and imagination! Argh! Yeah this story's that good!

Btw, I almost went for the flag button when I read "nipple" and "feeding" somewhere! Haha


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Ahhhh! Don't flag me, man! What's wrong with breastfeeding anyhow? I'm glad I got you under my thumb, lol, so thanks as always for the compliment. I hope that you're going to read Part 16 too, buddy. TTYS.


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marcofratelli 6 years ago from Australia

Haha, about time!! ;)


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

I think all of can use some "R and R" after a time, don't you? Thanks again, Marco!


cosette 6 years ago

haha that was great. that bodyguard got the message, no doubt. you write in a way that pulls in the reader. when she slipped her hand into his, i felt that whole moment. it was sweet. and i swear i smelled those noodles in the streets. now i want some...


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Wow. This is exactly what I was going for without being too overt about the whole thing. Yeah, I love udon noodles, lol. I'm amazed at myself that I got this far and still have yet to wrap this puppy up. More to come ;) Thanks, buddy!


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Hahaha! Dohn seriously, that was funny, but not romantic enough in the sight of girl :(.

Wow, I love this way of reading; when I can complain to the writer for everything I read. :p


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Ha! That scene wasn't meant to be romantic, Freya. But your own interpretation of this work is your own. Complain away :D


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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Complaining! Complaining! Complaining! Hahaha... your work is wonderful, Dohn. But I still really enjoying doing this: I'm complaining, master! Give me romantic scene! Hahaha... Just kidding.


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

I think I'm going to have to send you a romance novel if you're not finding it here, Freya! I have plenty of other writing that just might be more of your cup of tea :D And don't call me "master." It makes me blush ;)


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valeriebelew 6 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

Well hello again dohn. Its getting hot and steamy now, but I believe I would have used some of that ninja on that guy who kept beating on the door, whether or not it is supposed to exist in that area. ha. Good chapter. (: v


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dohn121 6 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York Author

Hi Valerie. Being that this story is so serious, I thought that the humor would lighten things up a bit. I had a roommate in college who was equally as clueless. Yeah, I think a but kicking should have been in order! Thanks again :)

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