The Golden Rose

Beauty in the Eye of the Beholder

Golden hair, golden gifts, golden rose,

for you.

Hair that glistens in the sun, Satin to

the touch.

Golden rose, timeless treasure, as are you,

Forever.

Dancing eyes, Porcelain skin, A smile that I

could die for.

Long strands of Gold ........ your hair, Pert little chin,

That´s you.

Rose--coloured cupid lips, and apple cheeks,

You´re beautiful.

Legs like Gazelles, so long, so brown, so fast,

You run.

Golden Hair, rose---bud lips, The Golden Rose,

That´s You..

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eye say 4 years ago from Canada

very nice ...


Lady T (JJ) 4 years ago

I loved this!!! So sweet and beautiful!


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you...

Oh wow, you are describing a goddess here, like you and me :)


Sunnie Day 4 years ago

Hello Dim,

Very nice Dim..I was thinking of a sweet young girl running through the fields..innocent and full of life..oh to be that young again..oh to have long legs that run like Gazelles..Beautiful

Have a wonderful Holiday,

Hugs,

Sunnie


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

Eye Say Thank you for being so quick to comment. my 1st visitor to this poem.

Lady Tenaz.. Glad you liked it. Take care.

blaise25 Thank you ., Love your comment. like you and me Ha Ha .

Sunnie.. Loved your comment. l´d settle for being able to run. ! Hee! Hee!!


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

what a very descriptive hub.. I loved it!


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

l m so glad that you loved it. It was very short and sweet.


mathira 4 years ago

Very vivid description and had the effect of a visual seen in person.


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

Lovely comment for which l thank you, mathira.


femmeflashpoint 4 years ago

Lovely description, Dim.

It gave me an "awwwww .... " moment. :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

awwwwwwww that is very sweet of you.

Thank you for the comment.


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mathira 4 years ago from chennai

Very cute and sweet, Dim.


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

very kind of you to comment, mathira, thank you.


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

So descriptive and beautiful Dim, lovely and voted up.


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

Thank you, Movie Master. Good to see you.....


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Such a lovely write--so full of love and so descriptive!


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

Thank you for your comment. ´´so full of love´´ you say.

l wrote it thinking of my grandaughter.

Take care.


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Angelique Newman 4 years ago from Canada

Beautifully written Dim; I love the words you've chosen, it so visual :)


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain Author

Thank you very much Angelique.

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