I was a particle, when I got created

I was a particle, when I got created,

Tiniest particle, near to not exist,

I traveled through darkness, on a predefined route!

And as I grew stronger, I found the way out!

Now this is a new world, and I’m crying loud!

As though I Know, I’m still not out!

As the time passes I began to recognize

A pair for whom, Im the entire life,

I was a particle, when I got created,

Tiniest particle, near to not exist

They put me in the class, to fill my glass,

Receiving many inputs, endorsing constant output!

I had to be on top, so that they can talk!

I felt the trouble, but never gave up the struggle!

As sun completes more round

My innocence is no more around

I prejudiced by the society, no more curiosity

Strongly followed trend, no chance to amend

I was a particle, when I got created,

Tiniest particle, near to not exist

Valves of heart creating constant motion,

But wall of my soul is so deeply frozen,

I want to erase what is already in place!

But the roar of society, emerged with extreme pace!

They broke me into particles, when I reemerged,

Tiniest particles, near to not exist!

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PDXKaraokeGuy 5 years ago from Portland, Oregon

well stated. Nice refrains. Voted up!


shobis 5 years ago

Thanks a Lot PDXKaraokeGuy Thanks a Lot


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shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

Hello Shobis! An Astonishing piece. As I said before also that Your words have Intense meanings, That is what Attractive about your poem. Thanks for sharing & Keep up the good work.

voted up, awesome, beautiful, interesting.

With Respect

from SHANAYA:)


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

It is your resolve that makes you who you are; otherwise we are all mere specks of dust in the vast universe; no one can pull you apart; you grow each day. Grow each day; learn each day; do not be a sheep; do not be a lion; do not be a tiger or a snake... be just you and you will find some truth in this.

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