sucked life

sucked life

sucked life
sucked life

sucked life

inside me i saw a man screaming so hard when the things became so raw , engulfed in between a merciless claw, and sucked by the life like the juice with the straw. you know how it feels like,you know how it feels like.

But i did like an optimist , in the evil,the good i saw, i knew a thing that your life is the way as the meaning you draw, but you know sometimes the conditions are of the kind that you lose your resistance, and falls like a tree which once stood strong but now it has fallen, all due to a sudden strom or cutted with the saw ,

You know how it feels like when you cant live up again, your dreams are all scattered, you want to make another stand, but you are engulfed in between a merciless claw, and sucked by the life like the juice with the straw.


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chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

So remind me of my own life. It suck when times hurt...but after a while..it get better but pain doesn't heal. It leaves a scar. Nicely written! :)


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prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india) Author

thanks chanroth for reading my poem...


Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

Perhaps the screaming man inside you is real you, trying to spread the wings.


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prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india) Author

ya it might be but i don,t understand this inside man,anyway i loved your comment..


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

You have used words very cleverly in this poem. Well done.


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prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india) Author

thanks mckbirdbks i am glad that you liked the poem..


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jujubees 5 years ago from Rhode Island

when life causes pain it also brings opportunity and a new way of looking at things or goals...it is all about perception and how we view life....sometimes our eyes may be wide open, but we do not see...the gift of pain is that it brings a new road. nice job on your writings....they bring many questions..


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prashant angiras 5 years ago from shimla(india) Author

yes you are right with your comment ,definitely the pain brings the new road..

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