Take Me There


Hold my hand


Because I’m falling


Take me there


To the place were everything’s beautiful


In a child’s eyes…


Were everybody laughs and no one cries and no one dies, the place where there is always tomorrow, the land of always, the land of forever.


Take me there


Tell me a story


Make it happy.


Maybe the guy can get the girl just this one time.


And the dog can live


And the parents won’t fight


We can stay up all night.


Swapping stories, telling dreams, speaking of all the impossible things that we know are possible.


Just hold my hand


Hold me tight


Even if it just for this one night.


It won’t mean anything, but will do everything at the same time


Take me there.


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Pixienot 5 years ago from Clarksville, Indiana

Wow! What a commentary on your inner self.

No one has to take you there... you are there. Look around - full scope, not just inside you.

You have not lost anything, you are in line to gain. Life is full of wonderful things. However, you will never see them if you do not open your eyes and look for them.

Do something for someone else - quick! You will be amazed at the beauty you not only see, but create!

Beautiful and sad poem!

Great writing. Keep up the good work!

Welcome to Hubpages.

voted up and awesome


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Sarah Writes 5 years ago from California Author

Thank you Pixienot for stopping by! I really appreciate your thoughtful comment, it always mean a lot when people take them time out to post something great :)


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michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

Really like this Sarah Writes. Great poem.

Michael.


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Sarah Writes 5 years ago from California Author

Thank you very much Michael! so happy you like it :)


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epigramman 5 years ago

.......well you took me there ....but then again your writing always takes me there and that's somewhere .... very special!

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Sarah Writes 5 years ago from California Author

Thank you very much epigramman, its always wonderful to receive good feedback from pieces you were unsure of. It really does mean the world to me :)


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epigramman 5 years ago

....I'm going to try and get some of my hub buddies to drop by here - okay Sarah of Great Writes? lake erie time ontario canada 9:47pm listening to Kraftwerk


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Sarah Writes 4 years ago from California Author

Hello epigramman, haven’t been on hub pages in a very long time, my computer broke :( so my apologies if your comments were hanging out in the inbox for a while. Also thank you very much for trying to direct more people my way, it’s very much so appreciated


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NightFlower 4 years ago

I enjoyed this walk through your emotions...love the way each writer has their own unique way of getting down path to get where they are going. Excellent.


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Sarah Writes 4 years ago from California Author

Hello NightFlower, what a lovely comment! I as well enjoy getting into others deep thoughts and emotions, a great perk to hubbing! Also I am so happy you liked this one, look forward to reading more of your work :) - Sarah

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