tangled light

A vision shines through shattered glass

of shade across the iron floor.

The picture will distort and grasp

the thoughts that wake, once more.


The broken dreams that I have seen

through the eyes of fiends and foes

they try to lead me to believe

my faith, though strong, shall close.


A fleeting light will pierce the night

to end a somber sleep

with dreams of demons in her eyes

the angel starts to weep.

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Ardie 5 years ago from Neverland

Beautiful words in a sad haunting way. Who is the angel that starts to weep?


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jravity1 5 years ago from bellevue, MI Author

Its gonna sound strange..but I believe its my angel . This poem came from a dream I had. I wrote it at like 3 in the morning after I woke up. Its about me dying and not going to heaven, she saw me go down instead of up. Hopefully that makes sense to you.


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Ardie 5 years ago from Neverland

Nah, that's not so strange. I believe in angels. How else can one explain the fact that I'm still kicking around?! :D However, its very sad that your angel watched you go down and couldnt help you. The poor dear must've felt like a failure.


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jravity1 5 years ago from bellevue, MI Author

I can't explain dreams. At least she was upset and not laughing, that would have hurt.


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Ardie 5 years ago from Neverland

Hahah! THAT would've been bad. But typical of the kids of angel I'd end up with :D

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