the dark life

sleep....The death we experience every night
sleep....The death we experience every night

Cradle of filth temptation

Dark Life

 Night falls on the earth

My dreams settle in

I'm In a fantasy once again

feels like I need to wake up

BUt the dream keeps me sucked in

 

I am dancing in the moonlight

Celebrating the death of day

screaming to the heavens

Please let this darkness stay

 

I am who I want to be

Once daylight is gone

I live how I want to live

Nothing here is wrong

 

The devil flashes a naughty grin

The air fills with sin

sunlight rises up

Here I am...Mortal once again

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drcrischasse 6 years ago from NH/Foxboro

Awesome, truly awesome!


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chrissie123 6 years ago Author

Thank you drcrischasse!!! means alot!!!


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Kid Eternity 6 years ago from Alabama

chrissie, I enjoyed this. the languages is sparse and the form is tight. it packs a lot of emotion into a small space. I hope you have the time to read and comment of one or two of my hubs as well. peace.


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

I agree with Kid Eternity, the tight and sparse language really works, it creates that nice tension. We have a new Great Hub Poet here!


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Chad A Taylor 6 years ago from Somewhere in Seattle...

chrissie, this is very good...


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rvsource 6 years ago

beautiful and haunting at the same time! Great job

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