violence(poem)

Domestic violence as defined in wikipedia as the attempt for one partner to dominate, harm and hurt another partner. This term is usually used to refer to home abuse. Yet, domestic violence appears in all cutures and differs in its intensities and sometimes might lead to suicide.It may take many forms some which may include:threats, excessive beating, bruisin, emotional, and sexual abuse as well.

There are a number of dimensions including: www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Domestic_violence

· Mode: physical, psychological, sexual and/or social.

· Frequency: on/off, occasional and chronic.

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One cold winter night he enters the room ferocity reflectd in his eyes

Then strikes her hard, spits in her face, he said her face he ought to despise

Sitting on the cold floor memories haunt her. She lay fragile and broken

Burning from within. She lay there, drowned out of life. NO word spoken

She cried herself to sleep, quivered to the atrocious memory

Yelled silently deep within to the throbbing, sensed his fury

Like a broken vase she laid . Her expensive beauty

Scared with hate and pain . She begged and prayed

God! Save my soul, I have fallen. For hours she laid

There on the floor watching the tears wash the floor

“You lazy b*$#!! You ugly worthless piece of shit! You hoar”



So why are you crying my angel ,why do you let him strike you

I know you feel so miserable, lonely and friends you got a few

So tell me my child would you rather

Live your life under his boot or die? Further

More you are a great independent soul

Don't accept to live in this shit hole

You are great deal with it

Just rise! Rise and leave this pit

But when love turns to violence

It simply doesn't make any sense


So throw away those scars and stand up

You are no one's door mat, not even a mop

You can live freely. Cherish that soul of yours

Your scared beauty is redeemed, feel no remorse

An angel's face, a heavenly smile, a pure soul

Throw away the past, don't you ever feel so small

You’re finally walking now

And all the pain is gone

So leave this hell and fly away

Burn the pain, throw all the dismay

 Uriel = dӑяК fцйЗrдl !

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Lgali 7 years ago

nice poem lot of good points


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

This is a nice "get up and go" call. You amaze me with the depth of your subjects and themes. Thanks for sharing :D


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

Lgali, thanks for your comment... And cris u really amaze me by how quick you are to find yourself here .... It is always a pleasure reading your comments :D... always happy for u commenting:D


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

hey, of course i'll always find my way here, I'm a fan, remember? :D


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

yeh... ok i remember...always a pleasure to find ur comment :D


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

One more thing, you might want to check out the poetry of Sandy, aka am i dead yet?, she's also a cool poetess like yourself. here's the link http://hubpages.com/profile/Am+I+dead%2C+yet%3F  (if you haven't seen her work that is)

we should unite you know, to keep the poetry, yes, flowing on HP :D


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

Thanks crirs, and by the way i did check her poetry. WOWOOW awesome !


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean

Got chills Uriel.


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Uriel 7 years ago from Lebanon Author

ohh ...sorry for that :(... thanks for the comment and becoming a fan...hoping to read more of your writing:D


townie 6 years ago

ayee very nice poem has great sayingss

jsut wodnering what title of it is


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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

Towni, thanks for the comment~totally appreciated :D


mighty nutz 6 years ago

yup that is a good poem i was looking it up for my homework


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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

THanks Mighty nutz :D


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Shelly Dee 6 years ago

I really like your poetry.I see a kindred spirit in you with my own stuff.I will continue to read all your poems.Keep up the good work.


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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

Shelly thanks for the comment and for stopping by, i promise ill stop by as well :D


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LarasMama 6 years ago from a secret location, Australia

Wow gorgeous poem! Love that you added background info as well. Domestic violence is a silent crime.

I have a similar poem called The Final Blow.


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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon Author

LarasMama ~ thanks for the comment i am definitely going to check your poem as well :D


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lifeisbutadream4 5 years ago from whitelake, MI

I saw on my e-mail that you are currently following me now, after yo commented on my "everthing happens for a reason" poem. Tahnks for the compliment, I've beentrying to write poetry that will touch a much larger groups of target audiece. One lady actually told me not to write personal poems, and poems about my life..but that's when i write is when I'm emotionally stressed or deeply in love..oh well, i write the best that i can. Thankyou for liking that poem, I recently started ible study goups and i guess they kinda of inspire me as well. If you have anygood topics lwt me know.. I was thinking of poltics, current events and the latest researching, this might put a double edge to my writing (poetry mixed with world news? Write back if you can


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jayb23 5 years ago from India

Simply awesome Uriel. Just don't have enough words to marvel at your talent. Keep up the good work.

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