waiting since long !

I am afraid ...!


Waiting for long in poise

for a man of her choice

tall handsom and perfect

complete without any defect

where in the hell she will get ?

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Deep Metaphysical 4 years ago from India

Weird! But the perfect man(or woman) is hard to find, perfection is a point of view. What is perfect to us, may not be perfect to others. It may not even exist.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

interesting :-)


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

Deep, thats what the second line of poem say...'a man of her choice' and rest everything says the 'pic'.....just laugh!

Thanyou Mhatter !


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

I think I found him! Or did he find me?

:)


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Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

Lol! a perfect man is like father christmas, we believe in them but they don't exist! great poem! cheers nell


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DREAM ON 4 years ago

Very funny and who would of guessed the perfect man was waiting for the perfect woman one bench over.


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

thankyou Martie, ...and i know you found him for your poems say everything!

Nell, thats to cry over..perfection lies in our imaginations and is never accomplished ....Thanks dear!

Thankyou DreamOn, for your comment of possiblities, haha!


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DREAM ON 4 years ago

My mother use to say I gave her grey hairs.I think my father made her hair fall out.There is no such thing of a perfect man just a perfect woman who can put up with any man.Love your hub.


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

nice, at least someone regard woman ! ...and indeed, aprraising a woman you've set values on yourself.....thankyou DreamOn!


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Au fait 4 years ago from North Texas

Interesting poem. I have many women use the 'excuse' that they are not married because they are waiting for the 'right man.' Men use this excuse also -- waiting for the 'right woman.' Often these people are making this excuse to avoid further discussion on the matter. In fact, they are waiting for no one. They have no desire to marry. Sometimes people have a hard time accepting that some people like being alone.

Voted up and interesting!


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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

True, but don't you think...that way sometimes they give you a chance to smile ..like the one you got here , through my poem....haha!

thankyou Au fait, for the visit and your insightful comment !

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