well placed kiss

Blew was this kiss . It whispered past your lips.

To land on the salty taste of sadness rolling down your cheek .

Oh woe is me , woe is me , woe is me.

Some might say it missed . But it didn't,

Because this kiss ,wasn't meant for pleasure.

But to try to ease your pain .

Woe is me , woe is me , woe is me.

I know its not easy , losing somebody you love.

Especially when its your mother.

Woe is me, woe is me.


At a time in your life when you so sorely need her.

Oh woe is me , woe is me, woe is me.

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Simplicity4All 4 years ago from Rhode Island, USA

beautiful! thank you for sharing your talent with words with all of us here who are lucky enough to read them :D


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

Blow a kiss this way, aware. For I need a kiss well placed on my cheek to make me feel better for losing someone. Not by death, and I cant say i love him, but I could have..if given the chance. So send a kiss my way, to help erase this pain, of rejection, and this feeling of not being good enough, worth enough. All I asked for was a bit more of his time...and he couldnt even give me that. I keep reading hubs today that really go with how i am feeling and are exactly what i need to hear. Thanks.


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aware 4 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida. Author

double barrel kiss one 4 simplicity for the read and comment .

the other for you miss Nikki. im sorry to hear your down today . love is often painful. hugs.


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

thanks/. I hope u can take the time and go read my poem that i wrote in inpiration to yours here. I added a link to yours on it :) its called "Send A Kiss My Way"


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

woe is me...a sad evocative poem...losing someone dear to us is like a big blow...


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cloudy_cool 4 years ago from London, UK

woe is me, woe is me, woe is me...

for pain has become my only relief...

in prose & poetry, for you and me...

crushing my only dearest belief...

your eternal love ma, you left for me...

the tree has fallen and so has the leaf...

woe is me, woe is me, woe is me...

death is my immortal enemy...

beautiful & touching poem...

Losing someone so close has never been easy!


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aware 4 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida. Author

TY cloudy.

I can sing these words as well.

After all ,they came to me in song.

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