what you do to me

Oh no here we go again.

Living in another fairy tale land.

It is filled with so many promises.

It is filled with so much love.

I feel so happy.

It feels so perfect.

I just have one problem...

It seems to good to be true.


You lift me up then you throw me away.

You build it up to maximize the pain.

Oh look at what you do to me.

Break me into pieces.

Throw it all away.

Keep me confused.

Make me feel so used.

If you don't want me then go away.


Get out of my head....


You give me all these beautiful feelings.

Then you find a way to tear them apart.

I am so confused don't know what to do.

I am so in love with you

just not sure you feel the same as I do.

I would give up anything for you.

you are all I ever wanted.


Just get out of my head.

If you don't feel the same.

Driving me insane.

I am dying for you.


You lift me up then you throw me away.

You build it up to maximize the pain.

Oh look at what you do to me.

Break me into pieces.

Throw it all away.

Keep me confused.

Make me feel so used.

If you don't want me then go away.


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

Painfully beautiful.


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thank you soo much!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Sorry Chrissie but he simply doesn't deserve you - you are far better than him. There is someone else far more deserving out there for you. Forget about him - he is not worth it!


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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Hey Chrissie, as much pain as you've received from these feelings, I would hope you had more positive to offset. But, that isn't always the case and I would agree with acaetnna, that anyone who treats you in the manner in which you've described above, truly doesn't deserve you at all. The time to move forward must come at some point, otherwise, you'll dwell on the pain. Address the cause of the pain, accept that that part of your life is now over and move on. Thank you for sharing. :)


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thanks everyone :) Dont worry this was actually inspired by a movie I was watching


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epigramman 5 years ago

...well ... what you do to me ... is make beautiful music with your words - and lucky me I'm all ears - and my eyes are happy too!


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much!!!


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Peaceful life 5 years ago from Las vegas

beautiful poem...


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

thank you!


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flying_fish 5 years ago from GTA

"inspired by a movie I was watching..."

I couldn't help laughing out loud, but in a good way. I think you captured a universal love-experience nicely - things come and go, and the only way for the passing of things to not hurt is to truly let things go when they will... Beauty of it is, if you can do that, then when they're with you, since you know that sooner or later it MUST pass, you don't have the worry of losing them to taint your enjoyment in the moment!

Nicely done Chrissie! I like hopeful and happy endings to poems, but I like an ending that leaves you with the hurt as well...


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

Thank you so much :D


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Little Kim 5 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

So hard to put yourself back together over and over again. You get to the point too tired to fight for it anymore, and get it back one more time and wonder if you want it anymore.


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

you are absolutely right many people get broken so much they just give up. Its all part of life I suppose.

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