why did you

Pain
Pain

 Why did yout turn away from me?

You left me here all alone.

Why did you have to hurt me?

I feel so lost.. and alone.

Can anyone hear me calling?

Has everyone turned away?

Why do you have to ignore me and leave me with all of this  pain?

It hurts me deep inside knowing I have been betrayed.

You were the only person that knew me.... My  only friend.

All I can do is ask why once again.

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shamelabboush 7 years ago

This is very nice too, but still there is so much pain! I think you write from your own experience? keep the good work.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

good to let it out. very healing. nice


cosette 7 years ago

raw and honest and touching. good job!


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gjfalcone 7 years ago from Gilbert, Arizona

Like a fresh wound still bleeding; it Elicits vengence. sweet sorrow. precious pain.


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gjfalcone 7 years ago from Gilbert, Arizona

I suppose this is my fav of yours 'cause I see I've already commented. I hope I'm allowed to make another.

That's the price you pay to summon the pain of betrayal. That's the price to express the "hurt deep inside".

If its any consolation, "All I can do is ask why once again" please don't do that, keep writing instead.

Another friend...gjf


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Laurie Favelle 6 years ago from Canberra, Australia

The best poetry is the simple stuff. It always says all that needs to be said, and much more likely to be read. (er, sorry about the rhyme).

I enjoy your work...keep going.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago

By seeing the world outside yourself as if you were looking through a window viewing your life before your eyes you can experience the experience but it never gets to you as a person.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love your poetry because you are not afraid to ask the penultimate question, and you show the pain is real. I hope that there is always a balancing force there too. You make us think, Chrissie.

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