wish you was there

The pain is different in everyone's eyes.
The pain is different in everyone's eyes.

You was never there to wipe my tears when I cried.

I had to fight all of my fears on my own.

I  could not count on you to guide my way.

I will not take back anything I say to you.

I will stray so far away.

I'm trying to erase all of the pain you brought me.

You....I wish you was there for me.

I wish you cared for me like family is suppose to.

The turn in my life.

You were not there to my surprise.

You broke your promise to me.

All I want to do is scream and cry..........

Every time  I think of how you hurt me in my life.

I can not get these feelings to go away!

You killed the best part of me.

You killed the part of me that loved you.

The best day of my life was spent without you.

I'm tired of wishing you was there.

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Cagsil 6 years ago from USA or America

Hey Chrissie, a very nice poem. I found it in the HubPages update from my email and stopped by to see your hub. Thank you for sharing. :) It's always a pleasure to hear other people's thoughts. :)


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loua 6 years ago from Elsewhere, visiting Earth ~ the segregated community planet

Sad...


TattoGuy 6 years ago

" You killed the best part of me ", tis sad how some people can actually do that in life, been there, got the t-shirt, loved this Poem ; )


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

This is so moving. Many of us can relate to this. I once loved this amazing guy from along ago, but I found him to be unreliable and in the end I know I would have to take care of myself as he could never take care of me or put me first. He almost qualified in most other "areas", just not in the "you can rely on me, babe" department. We all want that special person to be there for us in our life. Sometimes loving us isn't enough. Great writing, Chrissie.


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

The last three lines of this poem are so powerful, and so final. Words can be so powerful. I worry that words used the wrong way can also be so destructive. In some ways I don't want to be a strong purveyor of strong words. I am a girl who'd rather say nothing to someone rather than say something that I know will hurt deeply. Even though the person might be hurting me. Love can be a killer sometimes.

I love reading your hubs, Chrissie. I hope the future brings you better things, and the right kind of person in your life. Take care.

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