written love

i close my eyes

and imagine your hands

on my skin

in another world

we are lovers

never leaving our bed

writing our words

on each others skin

i read your words

and they echo through me

making me seethe with fantasy

everything you describe

i want brought to life

your hands

your hair

your fu*king neck

roll around with me

on top of me

beneath me

through me

this is what your words

do to me


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

It was late, and i wanted to post something before i never posted again. After reading a dear friends many emails, this is what i came up with.


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JayDeck 4 years ago from New Jersey

Back after a long absence, yours is the first stop i made.

I don't know what to say. It's like I was supposed to read your poem.

The universe is a funny thing Pink.

Thanks,

-J


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Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

very passionate. that photo made me go ouch though lol.


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

J- its funny what we draw in. and im over the moon that i was your first stop. you have no idea how much something like that means to me. that you got online, went to hubpages, and i was your first read. the word is flattered, but its more than that. thank you so much.

nikki- hey love!


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Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

I enjoyed reading about love and lust in your composition. It is very soothing


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Docmo 4 years ago from UK

passionate, powerful and poignant. 'nuff said.


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

Vinaya- thank you. I hope my words are as theraputic to read as they are to write.


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

Docmo- its little pieces of me.**


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sligobay 4 years ago from east of the equator

Entwined in a lover's embrace is where we all belong.


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sam209 4 years ago

I'm a sucker for love so I must say that was beautiful!


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

What is there without love. More logic and less pain i guess.


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Cagsil 4 years ago from USA or America

Hey Pink, very creative. It's always a pleasure to come by your hubs to see what you came up with. You have brought out an interesting thought, solid feelings and you would be correct that much of life would be meaningless without love. Logic doesn't make sense with regards to love and logic won't assist in creating less pain either. When love is gone, the only love one can depend on is the love we each receive from ourselves. Thank you for sharing. :)


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the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me. Author

Its a pleasure for me when you come by as well CAGS! Though im probably feeling the same feelings over and over it feels different all the time somehow. Alright well off to shower than get this kid in bed. Ill indulge in my own feelings when im not so tired haha


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services4all 4 years ago from U.S.

Nice post, I like the video and picture which you have added to it. It is really awesome.

If you have time please visit my hub also & follow me.

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