you are stuck with me now

The Poem of love ever lasting

You are the love of my life,

The thought of you brings me to my knees.

One day soon I will make you my wife,

I need you so soon please.

The mention of losing you cuts like a knife,

You are stuck with me now like a bad case of herpes.

Never will I leave your side,

Always will you hold my hearts keys.

Your beauty is an ever lasting source of pride,

My soul you will always appease.

Our hearts will never divide,

You are stuck with me now like a bad case of herpes.

Us together into heaven our hearts ascend,

Just the mention of you gives me the crazies.

Together our paths will never bend,

Every one that watches us only envies.

My love for you will never end,

You are stuck with me now like a bad case of herpes.

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Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Duh! I can't stop laughing now! Even after I heard it before, still, the similarity between herpes with the one you love is really unusual. Unless, not like Herpes, you want her in your life, right?

Thank you, Pintails, for good laugh, for sweet words and for the thought. :X

PS: Kitten? LOL. Is that mean she have the same place with Henny in your heart? Hmmm.... :D


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Micky Dee 5 years ago

I see the loving and funny side at the same time! God bless you Pintails! I love you like penicillin.


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BobbiRant 5 years ago from New York

This is so cute. Love it. It's OK to be 'stuck' sometimes. Great poem.


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pintails7886 5 years ago from Memphis TN Author

Well i thought it was a good way to convey deep love. Once you you hold my heart i'm yours forever like herpes there is no cure for my love, I just think that some may miss the point because herpes tends to have a bad rep, but I was hoping to get them to look past that.


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Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

From the first time I read this, I am trying to ignoring bad aspect of herpes and look at the humor instead. I really understand the meaning inside the line, but never once, I imagined to be able to look at love from weird place like you did in this poem. You are indeed the sweet weirdest man I ever know. Hahaha...

"You are stuck with me now like a bad case of herpes"

Micky is right. Maybe it is because you are like penicillin and that is why you stuck with "feel like herpes" loving woman. ^_*


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toknowinfo 5 years ago

Cute poem. I like your writing style. You certainly have a way with words.


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pintails7886 5 years ago from Memphis TN Author

Thank you for the kind words Tokno, I wrote it just as a joke obviously but it turned out to be pretty funny

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