your essence

Close your eyes.
Let me lead you by the beach,
As the wind takes your hair
Along the velvet skyline.
The sun Close your eyes.
Let me lead you by the beach,
As the wind takes your hair
Along the velvet skyline.
The sun visable..
Thought a minor figure
Compared to your beauty.
Your very essence appeals to those in doubt,
And misleads the portrait of itself
To see you smile, priceless
As even my vision isnt perfect
I can see you 20/20
Your my hearts rival,
And in that can do no harm
Thought a minor figure
Compared to your beauty.
Your very essence appeals to those in doubt,
And misleads the portrait of itself
To see you smile, priceless
As even my vision is not correct
I can see you 20/20
Your my hearts rival,
And in that can do no harm.
Bliss is what you bring
Today is not nearly enough..i need u now
Tommorrow,
Forever, and thereafter
Open your eyes

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epigramman 3 years ago

Sublime, just simply beautiful and a title to die for - I love the way you write - it's just so pure and heartfelt. So nice to meet you and receiving an endorsement from you on my humble little hubspace means a lot because you really are a terrific writer.

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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow I agree with the Epi man.. you write beautiful and to die for.. so nice to read such poetry .. many blessings to you

I will share on Facebook..

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Happy new year

Debbie


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giftedwriter86 3 years ago from new castle ,de Author

Wow. I honestly dont know what to say. I went and put my poems on another site and they told me that i could not write.lol. You guys made me feel like that is not the case. Thank you very much. I will read and comment on your poems in the days coming..thank you

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