Flying In My Susana Star. A Short Story.

Sunday, September 4, 2011



I'm soaring the skies in my Susana Star. The wind is cutting threw the clouds to bounce me all around in the sky blue Heavens.

Round the mountain peaks , and down below are the threatening hard sharp rocks and edges that would challenge the heart of me as I accelerate to the clouds, and to the limits of Heaven above.

It was my dream to fly so high and to feel the zest of freedom in the most delightful ways that would test the courage of men, or calamity driven women.

The tests of my life are before me in my Piper cub , my tiny air ship that lifts me to joys unknown yet threatening to my utter life .

Being alone is my usual calling , but that will change soon. Flying alone was my destiny as I felt the coming of larks, and angels on their way to greet me to another junction, but then I fell in love.

With little fuel, and too far to go, I had to calmly redefine in my mind how I would land on the Rocky mountains below to pick up my Journey Girl, my mountain Lilly, my dearest love of my needy tender heart as she awaits the first ride into Heaven with me in our soon to be Piper Cub.

Thus I have landed in a short but rocky field as my Journey Girl runs as fast as her pounding heart can stand it ,and she cries for me to take her away like I am some grand and armoured knight of Camelot.

With all our love , we hug and embrace and kiss somewhere in a paradise so sweet and deep and beautiful in a non restrained and wonderful passion. In all my heart she brings me insightful glorious quests for remarkable worlds unknown.

Now into my arms she melts, and with little fuel we fly away higher and higher like in a jet in our cub to reach a trinity made by God.

And so it was that we flew to our Heaven somewhere to a pure and wonderful place where we found a mentor with a good book to bring us together in Holy Wonder.

My delightful Journey Girl became my life's mate, the love of my life, all the woman I would ever need to cherish and adore until my heart beats no more.

She loves me she does, as we sore the Heavens in our Piper Cub. What pleasure it is with a cuddling arm to secure me as I throttle up above the mountain peaks beyond the great and profound beauties of color and natural born wonders.

To breath, and to joy the visions of eagles born in new freshly cracked eggs as they chirp and complain for the nutritional values and zests of delicious fine morsel meals brought to them to their nest by a proud formidable winged mother bald eagle.

The comfortable matter of life and living in the challenges of existence is what my Journey Girl and I simply seek.

And there it is where we land on solid ground in a new reality where I will work, and she will keep house, and where children will be born, and will grow, and go to school, and then will flourish like roses, and kind gentlemen until they fall in love.

The End.

God Bless Everyone.




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Pollyannalana 5 years ago from US

A beautiful fantasy story. I think you must be a day dreamer. I use to be and I sort of miss it but I think it was necessary for me at one time and now it is just gone. I think back and it is like that was a different person. Hm that might make a good hub, lol, thanks...and God bless you always and your family. I hope everything worked out.


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stars439 5 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State. Author

Dear Pollyannalana : You are a wonderful writer, and your imagination , and joy for those wonders are always with you only waiting to become present again if you desire them. You are so much a professional writer, and skillful talent that you probably unleash your wonderful imagination when your ready to use it, but what do I know but nothing concerning the ingenious brilliance of minds. I since that our wonderful minds do as we wish them to do in many certain ways. Sometimes I restrained myself from writing words that may not be exactly correct to use in my sentences, but I try not to trouble myself with my own short commings , or inhibitions of not defining my thoughts well enough. I don't know what the heck I am saying, but it is somewhere in the ball park. God Bless You Dear Heart, and thank you for writing.


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Poohgranma 5 years ago from On the edge

You've written a beautiful and imaginative story. The world they flew to sounds just like a place where you would be happy with peace and love, leaving the stress and unhappiness of this one behind. I hope you find that place within your soul, dear friend. Wonderful story!


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stars439 5 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State. Author

Dear Phoenix : Thank You Precious Heart. And I wish you ,and Gary could also go far away to a beautiful place where everything is wonderfull, and just the wat you both would want it. God Bless You Precious Heart.

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