"I want to live: a poem dedicated to aborted babies"

"I want to live" a poem dedicated to aborted babies"

They want to live just like you. They want to have a future, just like you; "don't they deserve to have a choice, just like you."
They want to live just like you. They want to have a future, just like you; "don't they deserve to have a choice, just like you."

"I want to live" a poem dedicated to aborted babies"

I want to say that this poem is dedicated to the many babies that didn't live through pregnancy. This poem is not to rattle any cages, even though I'm sure some will be; this poem is not to put anyone down for their belief or actions. I'm speaking solely for the babies that can't speak for themselves.

I want to live, just like you

It's the natural thing to do

At the moment of conception , I was given a new hope.

To pray that I'll be able to cope.

I want to live, just like you

It's the natural thing to do

To live my life of expectations and dreams

Not knowing whether or not I'll come into being.

I want to live. just like you

It's the natural thing to do

Your mother's choice was to let you live

The life of yours she wanted to give.

I want to live, just like you

It's the only natural thing to do

I have a heart that beats,now.

and Iook mom, I can breathe

But my lonely journey must come to end , I do concede.

I want to live, just like you

It's the only natural thing to do

You all talk about your choice to kill

What about my choice to live.

I want to live, just like you

It's the only natural thing to do

As I travel down this lonely road , all alone

No one to love me, or call me their very own.

I want to live, just like you

It's the only natural thing to do

I will never be wrapped in a colorful little blanket and carried home.

Or no one waiting with open arms

I want to live, just like you

It's the natural thing to do

I'm here sitting, waiting in your womb

Knowing I'm in danger awaiting my doom.

I want to live, just live you

It's the natural thing to do

You gave me a breath to breathe

A little heart that beats

But your choice to kill me, made it all incomplete

I want to live, just like you

It's the natural thing to do

Here I set waiting like a sheep at the slaughter

To be ripped, mangled and torn apart

I wonder even if my mother has a heart.

I want to live, just like you

It's the natural thing to do

I did not ask to be conceived, or brought into this world of hatred and shame

but your careless actions has brought me unnecessary pain.

I want to live, just like you

It's the natural thing to do.

Benny Faye Douglass




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creativeone59 2 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Briana, if there are extenuating circumstances, that is a different story, this poem is for women that got pregnant and don 't want the problem, it hurts me that the babies don't get a chance, even though what ever the circumstance was they suffer the consequences.


Briana Hooper 2 years ago

Screw. You.

Not all women who get pregnant can safely carry a baby. What should be done if the mother's life is at risk? What if she's raped?


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creativeone59 4 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Kitty, for your visit and support. Yes,God forgives us everything except for blasphemy of the Holy spirit. All we have to do is sincerely ask God for his forgiveness and it is forgiven. God bless you. creativeone59


kittyluvs101 4 years ago

I appreciate your poetry. I see things from the babies points of view. Can someone be forgiven for having an abortion or does God consider it a murder?


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creativeone59 4 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

ahjkay, thank you for your visit and comment. God bless you. creativeone59


ahjkay 4 years ago

LOL!


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creativeone59 4 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Paula, for your visit and comment and I hope the same as you. Babies have no one to defend them, that's why i wrote the poem. God bless you and yours. creativeone59


Paula 4 years ago

this is a great poem. bi just really hope girls/women really take responsibility of themselves and prevent pregnancy other than obortions!


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creativeone59 4 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Monique for your visit and for your comment on my poem, I appreciate you and I'm so sorry for your lost that you had to endure. Most people don't understand that if any creature has a heart that beats,that it is life. You have the same name as my niece. since you don't believe in God, bless you and your babies anyway. creativeone59


monique 4 years ago

#1 yes am atheist

#2 I dnt believe in abortion

#3 when I was 17 I was forsed to have an abortion because I was a minor and had no say

#4 today I have to live w/ the fact that I have 2 alive heathy children and one child that I couldn't have because it would put shame on my family who was very wealthy

#5 I don't even talk to my parents and I haven't in about 4 1/2 years.


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Shazu, for your visiut and your blessed comment.Godspeed. creativeone59


Shazu 5 years ago

Beautiful. :(


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Bianca, for your visit and your comment. I wrote this poem to maybe help someone thinking of killing their baby and I hope it save babies lives. God bless you. creativeone59


Bianca 5 years ago

thanx for this poem i'm not pregnant but oneday when i have a children i wil tell them about this poem...im glad i came across it and i hope other young people do too.


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you wytegarillaz, for your visit and your comment, I agree totally with you. God bless you


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wytegarillaz 5 years ago from Australia

Life begins the second of concepttion, I have lost 2 babies and often wonder about them , their personalalities, I love miss them heaps, Please dont kill our babies . Someone will love them if you don;t


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you again Rastamermaid, I wrote my feelings down as I see it without judging anyone,I guess people pretty much do what they're going to do, I just know because of the word of God that I can't do it in good conscience and live with myself.I also know there are extinuating circumstances, but I still choose life for the babies. God bless you. creativeone59


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Rastamermaid 5 years ago from Universe

Very sensitive issue,with so many views on when exactly life begins and different cultures views.

What about rape or incest victims?

What about the cultures where baby boys are wanted and not baby girls?

What about scientist that say it's not a viable fetus til it has a heartbeat around 18 weeks?

What about when a woman's over 35 has a amino and told the baby has downs syndrome?

I can not judge or tell anyone what to do,or how to feel,because it's not my call to make for their life.

I just know God only puts on you what you can handle.

As I stated very,very sensitive subject!

Respect!


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you form your visit and your kind comment, I hope this poem make a difference to someone with a heart. God bless you. creativeone59


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creativeone59 5 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you for your visit Kavita and comment, I didn't mean to make you cry, I was just being real. God bless you. creativeone59


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Karen Wilton 5 years ago from Australia

Such a sensitive issue and you have put it into words beautifully. I am sure all the unborn babies out there are smiling down on you and saying as I do, many thanks and blessings to you.


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Kavita Trivedi 5 years ago from London

I read this and cried - so beautiful. In some cultures, women don't have a choice. Thank you for sharing :)


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you C. Taylor for your visit, I see I rattled your cage, I wasn't my intention to hurt anyones feelings, I try to write truth the way I see it. Life is created by God; and if there is a heart that beats, then there should be a brain that finction too,even as small as it maybe, because there's no life without a brain, that means life cease to exist and the heart doesn't beat without the brain. As for the word killing, if you get an abortion, it's killing or murder of an innocent life that cannot defend or protect themselves. People don't want to feel guilty by commiting this act, so they will call it anything but killing or murder, but what is boils down to is ,it's exactly that. Sometimes the truth hurts, but God say the truth is the light. I know my writing want please everyone, but if I can get 99% of the readers in my favor; a few negatives want hurt. God bless you. creativeone59


C. Taylor 6 years ago

I think you should probably research a little more about human fetal development before claiming that they're capable of desire, or choice; particularly before they even have a brain.

Additionally, calling abortion "killing" is not an ideal way to "not rattle any cages."


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Loves to Read, I appreciate your support and understanding of what I was trying to say and not.take it personally. God bless you. creativeone59


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you always exploring, when I wrote the peom, I was sitting in judgement on anyone, and I always try to walk in others shoes, what I'm saying is, I don't have the heart to kill a harmless helpless baby, no disrepect to anyone, these are my feelings. Thank you for comment and feedsback. Glod bless. creativeone59


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you maven, sorry it to so long, but I appreciate you and your comment if everyone felt the way you do, there wouldn't be any aborted babies to worry about.Godspeed. creativeone59


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Teresa, for your comment and feedback. I appreciate you. Godspeed. creativeone59


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Loves To Read 6 years ago

creativeone59 a very moving poem on behalf of those tiny babies who will never get the chance to speak for themselves. Back,pre 70's and 80's most abortions were done by what was commonly known as back yarders. Many girls who took this path to get rid of their unwanted pregnancy found that they could never again have a child. Others weren't so lucky and died of septic poisoning or some other complications. Abortions were actually illegal. Girls were actually put in homes to have their babies who were then adopted out. It didn't matter what the young mother wanted.

When birth control became available, abortions became legal (go figure) but only up to the age of 3 months. This was bad enough. I know there were some exceptional circumstances for abortion such as sexual abuse or rape but at least the girls had a choice while the foetus was small.

I do not follow the laws of today, they are totally irresponsible. There is so much birth control around these days and it is available practically anywhere and to anyone. There should not be any unwanted pregnancy's now and to top it all off you can legally abort babies now right up to their birth. What heartless person would carry a baby for 8 or 9 months, feeling them moving around then to terminate them.

You are so right sister. Those precious babies did not ask to be conceived. But there are many couples out there who would gladly give them a home

God bless you creativeone59


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always exploring 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

A beautiful poem. I feel that we have to walk in others shoes before we pass judgement. I could never abort a baby, but there are others who feel differently.My hope is that if a child is not wanted, the mother will have enough love to deliver and let someone adopt. ( like me)

GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Teresa, I know it's so true, If I had my way, I would rescue every baby from abortion, because they deserve to live and I love them so dearly. Thank you for your comment and feedback, Godspeed. creativeone59


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Teresa Laurente 6 years ago from San Antonio, Texas, U.S.A.

Really beautiful and true.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Edwyne Rouchelle,for your comment and feedback, Godspeed. creativeone59


Edwyne Rouchelle 6 years ago

Well, one thing is certain: no matter which side of the issue one might find themselves, this poem is very insightful and thought-provoking. Lovely writing. I was moved by your talent.


a sensible being 6 years ago

you have got to be kidding me...


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

you are welcome dear, thanks for reading it and thanks for you comment and support. creativeone59


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mistywild 6 years ago from Houston, TX (Proud Texan)

Very moving poem, makes one think. Thanks for sharing.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Than you bri for stopping bu hub and leaving me a comment. have a blessed day. creativeone59


bri 6 years ago

this was a very touching poem..... Good job!


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Kazzy, for your input. Blessing to you. creativeone59


kazzy 6 years ago

pro abortion all the way


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

I think you might be on to something. thank you for reading my hubs ,I hope you continue. godspeed. creativeone59


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joque 6 years ago

I'd loke to ask a question. What do you think jappens to those babies that are aborted. I think they enter heven immediately, or their spirits do, but will they be placed in the womb of a living human being maybe in the millineum. What is your opinion?


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you stricktlydating, it would be a better world for little babies if every women thought that way. thanks again for your comment and your feedback. Godspeed. creativeone59


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stricktlydating 6 years ago from Australia

I love this poem. I hope that it reaches someone who really needs to hear these words. It's beautiful. A baby is still a baby, even when it's in your womb, and as a mother of an unborn child, the very least you can do is give them a chance to live their life.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you sweet lady for your comment and feedback, it's well appreciated. have a blessed day. creativeone59


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ivori 6 years ago from Titusville

Everyone contemplating abortion should read your poem. Your poem stirs emotions. God bless the innocent children.


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maven101 6 years ago from Northern Arizona

Only a mother, grandmother, and great grandmother could have written this expressive and touching poem.

The line " I'm here sitting, waiting in your womb,

Knowing I'm in danger awaiting my doom."...

really got to me...These unborn children are much more than " viable protoplasm " as some would want to describe...Thank you for this reminder that life, every life, is precious...Larry


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you sweet lady for your support and comment and feedback. have a blessed day. creativeone59


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fastfreta 6 years ago from Southern California

That was great creativeone59. You wax poetic very well. Seriously, the subject is very controversial, and I applaud you for taking it on. Very good poem.


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you TrudyVan for your comment and support. Godspeed. creativeone59


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TrudyVan 6 years ago from South Africa

I am anti abortion. I love your Hub, Lovely poem my friend


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Godslittlechild for your comment and feedback. creativeone59


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you Hello hello for all your comments and your feedback. creativeone59


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Godslittlechild 6 years ago

Very touching poem. Thank you!


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Hello, hello, 6 years ago from London, UK

Hello creativeone59, this is really something. Congratulation and well done. Thank you


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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona Author

Thank you for making a very true point Veronica. We can't do any thing, but I can voice my opinion about it. Thank you for your support, comment and feedback. Godspeed. creativeone59


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Veronica Allen 6 years ago from Georgia

This poem really moved me. It is so heartwrenching that thousands of babies will never see the light of day, because of the choices thier parents made to end their lives. I wonder if they ever stop and think about that fact that they themselves are still living and breathing due to the fact that their parents choose life instead of death for them.

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