Why don't you say hello?

I could make your life more wonderful

Do you know how much I care?

Do you know how much I tried to get your attention?

Do you know how much I am in love with you?

I watch you walk by me day after day

How come you do not see me?

You light up my world with every word you speak

You smile for everyone else

I give it time but nothing seems to be happening

I love who you are

You talk to the pretenders who flatter you with comments you adore

They are thoughtless and really don't appreciate you

Why can't you see how they string you along like beads dangling in the air

I keep telling myself she will finally view the way it really is

I keep trying to convince myself it doesn't matter

I try to move on but it is no use

Someday you will know

You deserve so much better

I have faith you will feel my passion

The love you deserve goes beyond measure

You find so many other interests to occupy your time

You may never know who I am

I tried many times to tell you but your ears became deaf

My heart rests in the scale you constantly tip

You play with my  emotions repeatidly battered and torn

You see me slowly unravel at the seams

It never phazes you

How could you be so cold?

My love for you I still hold

Some things in life are not meant to be

I wait for that special day to come

My dreams are flipped upside down one by one

I still have hope and desire

You don't walk here anymore

It is too late

You have found someone else

I am left alone as I stand and wait

You have missed my love and my life with you

It was not my dream it has to be destiny

Comments 14 comments

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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

I really like this, it's very interesting. Sounds and feels like a crush and a bit like unrequitted love too. We all get those pangs at some point in our life I think. Someone we know who doesn't notice us, or we are afraid to say what we feel. Or maybe other commitments make us bite our lip.

Was that a wee typo with the line.."You play with my it battered and torn..." ? I figured it was "heart" but feel free to correct me! Cheers for this great hubs and rewarding read here!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Here I sit -broken hearted...I know how that ends. I live it every day. Thanks for great thoughts well done!


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Cheeky Girl It was a crush in Elementary school I never forgot.Years later I ran into her.She didn't remember me.I didn't want to use heart again and I was thinking of love or something else?Micky Dee It is funny how somethings change the way we feel for the rest of our lives.


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mailxpress 6 years ago from New York

Hi,

Good Hub about deep feelings. We have all been there once if we are lucky enough.

Sometimes time goes by and we look back and ask ourselves why we felt those feelings in the first place. The mind can play games.

mailxpress


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

mailxpress love your comments.I think time has to heal old wounds and maybe we were better off not going the direction we wanted most.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

aw ho sad she has noticed you yet...


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

poetlorraine Life goes on and are love gets stronger.Has this ever happened to you?


poetlorraine 6 years ago

life changes all the time, here i am and there you are...


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Tubbs Merouge 6 years ago from Louisiana

Great hub with lots of feeling in it.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

poetlorraine That keeps life interesting and each day a wonderful adventure.Tubbs Merouge Thanks for the comment.Each day it is amazing what we can learn if we only take notice.


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Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

Unrequited love is one of the worst situations one will experience. hmmmm....sometimes, we must keep in mind, and in our hearts, that things happen for a reason.


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DREAM ON 6 years ago Author

Beth 100 Luckily are minds are able to move on but some part of us will never forget.Thanks for the comment.


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Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

Well you are certainly noticed here..... with affection...Hello!!!!


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DREAM ON 4 years ago Author

Dim Flaxenwick You give me a smile that comes from deep down and bubbles like a water fountain higher and higher.I am cold and refreshing and thirst quenching when you are parched.My only hope is that you will be satisfied and will return many times if the need arises.Thanx so much lots of love and laughs coming your way.

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