For My Better Half

Nobody is perfect... until you fall in love.

Just wanted to share the first poem a man has ever written for his better half. I really appreciate the effort that this sweet guy did for the one he loves so much.

He doesn't write poems or any short stories especially about love; so I guess that this word of love comes deep inside his heart to show his appreciation for the love he felt not only on action but on words. Love really moves in mysterious ways.


I decided to publish this poem. I know that he deserves this and he’ll be thrilled to know that finally, he can see his first poem on web.


Well, congratulations, Mr. Gorgeous.

Love kept inside
Love kept inside

Because of 14th day of December
I am so grateful my dear
For proving to me the sincerity
Of your words with honesty.


But I would like to ask for apology
For I maybe a hindrance to your way
I am simply telling what is in me
To let you know what I have today.


Well, you can have it, as you may say
Without even telling me
But because you want to be true
You admitted before me very honestly.


With the words I have spoken
Let it be your guide in every action
With hope that you will treasure
The love that is planted to blossom forever.


But when time comes that you need someone
Maybe because of your desire as human
Please do it with gentleness, as a breeze
That from day to day, I may not even notice.


But for the meantime, I am so grateful
For the world is so wonderful
Despite of the uncertainties of everyday
Still it breathe of beauty for me.


And now, how I wish and pray
That this love be our source of life everyday
Holding hands together so tightly
As we, the twin hearts, ventures our every day.


Thank you for this very sweet poem, my dear. I will always love you.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

More by this Author


Comments 26 comments

billybuc profile image

billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

I was going to take the day off and not read any hubs but I saw your name pop up and decided you were worth it. :) I wasn't disappointed. How lovely of you to share this poem...looking forward to more from you my friend.


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

This is very very ahhmazing! Thank you so much!! I'm so happy to hear this Billybuc. I am so grateful to know that you appreciate my hubs.

Godbless you and your family always. This is very kind of you, thank you so much.


bravewarrior profile image

bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

You've made your friend proud, unknown! How very giving of you to share the spotlight!


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you bravewarrior! He'll be thrilled of this, I know. He's a great man, when he first showed me his poem i can see the pure happiness shining thru his eyes.

Thank you so much bravewarrior!


billybuc profile image

billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

You have a great deal of wisdom for someone so young. I look forward to anything that you write and I find myself wanting to know more about you. You are a mystery that needs to be solved. :)


tobusiness profile image

tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Love is so amazing, it brings even giants to their knees. I'm sure your friend's wife will be very proud of him. I particularly love the last verse.


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Tobusiness, I appreciate your comment. They still have a long way to go...I just wish that they end up together. Their love is so much complicated.

Thank you sooo much!


Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. This is a wonderful poem which one can tell comes straight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.


Vellur profile image

Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Awesome a wonderful poem for your better half. Voted up.


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you coming from my heart Gypsy!


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks Vellur! Cheers!


blaise25 profile image

blaise25 4 years ago from close to you...

Nothing could take your breath away more when someone has written a poem for you. This is so beautiful.


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yes Blaise, really is. the words on the poem will always belong to someone the poet dedicated. it's lovely and very beautiful gift a man could give to his beloved,.


kj force profile image

kj force 4 years ago from Florida

Very simple words coming from a man..who has discovered a very deep love for his better-half. What a wonderful frend you must be to put his words out there for him to see..( didn't do that on purpose)..thanks for sharing..enjoyed the read...


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi KJForce! Last night, he sends me a message, he said he read the poem and was very excited and thrilled.

He said thank you to all of you!


Rosemay50 profile image

Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Thank you for sharing this lovely poem written from the heart of a man who does not normally write poetry, the fact that he wrote one especially for your friend is truly awesome.


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Actually...the poem is for me :)

Thank you so much. He read your comments and he's very thankful to all!


Brent 4 years ago

Heart-melting Poem! You must be very lucky to have him. Good luck to both of you!


molometer profile image

molometer 4 years ago

So nice to read something so positive and life affirming. Well done that man and thank you for sharing it with us all.


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi Molometer. Thank you for reading! :)

So glad to hear your kind words.

xoxo.m.


josh3418 profile image

josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

It was very thoughtful of you to share this poem for this man, whomever he is, it was a job well done!

Voted up, beautiful, and awesome!


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi J! Wazzup? thanks for votes. Love it!!


josh3418 profile image

josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

You are very welcome! :) And now it is time for me to head off to bed :)

Take care and have a great day M! :)

p.s. new hub is up if you wanna be the first commenter hehe :) And, I am tweeting you my blog link now.


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

SAd to say, im not able to make it on top! You have so many great fans out there! Oh my..you're very talented indeed. You can check it now, i already published it :)


josh3418 profile image

josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

No worries! Aww thanks you are great too! :). I am gonna read it first thing in the morning, have a great day M!


unknown spy profile image

unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks J. You too, have a great night! :)

    Sign in or sign up and post using a HubPages Network account.

    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    No HTML is allowed in comments, but URLs will be hyperlinked. Comments are not for promoting your articles or other sites.


    Click to Rate This Article
    working