Fallen Friendship

Pictures and letters. Broken hearts and torn papers. Memories remain.

The bright laughter of the sunlight
Turns into a cold, moonless night
Chill run down my spines
As I gaze on the endless skyline.


"Save your tears 'cause I'll come back"
I heard you say to me
I wanna shout and bid you goodbye
But this heart of mine can only cry.


The days turn to weeks
Weeks turn to months
And months turn to years
But your shadow isn't near.


Friendship promises sometimes break
Alone in the world I stray
For another friendship I make
Till I found another soul to stay.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

'....The days turn to weeks

Weeks turn to months

And months turn to years

But your shadow isn't near.....'

dear.......moving and so touchy lines.

loved it.......all votes up...sharing too.....You always amaze me so much with your brilliant creativity.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

M,

Beautiful poem here, sad, but true sometimes. Powerful message M!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello deergha! thank you so much for the comment!!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi J. thanks a lot for the kind message.


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

Very beautiful.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

thanks snow :)


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Hi Spy! This is so beautifully sad!! Awww.... Nice flow.

Voting up ....


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Curiad 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

Sad and Beautiful, Moving words M.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Sweet melancholy....savor the moment for it is fleeting....beautiful work spy!


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AnUtterTravisty 4 years ago

This is a all to common feeling. After establishing such strong ties, the feeling of just losing friends hoping that they come back one day is one of the worst feeling. Great work on the poem, i hope who ever you are waiting for comes back to you.


Janhorner 4 years ago

Very short and sweet but so many meanings. You are such a good poet and I love the way you just let your words tumble out and produce some beautiful verses.

Jan


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Unknown, you still do love and sadness so beautifully. Well done as always. Voting up all the way


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Ah, Spy, I hope this speaks of times past. It breaks my heart to feel the pain in your beautiful soul as portrayed by your poetry.

This is beautiful and so sad. Remember you have a friend in Florida.

Have you started working on that visa yet?

Love Ya,

Sha


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I think it could be hard to navigate back to this realm from another.


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kashmir56 4 years ago from Massachusetts

Hi M. So beautifully written with a touch of sadness to it !

Vote up and more !!!


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carter06 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

Such heartfelt expression unknown...powerful, succinct & beautiful...lots of votes...cheers


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writer20 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

Your wonderful is sad and beautiful.

Voted up and interesting, Joyce


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thelyricwriter 4 years ago from West Virginia

Unknown spy, you truly have a way with words:) This was another beautiful example of that.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Spy, This is beautiful and sad..Excellent!


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marcoujor 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Reminiscent, deep, reaching from your soul... UP & Awesome.


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kj force 4 years ago from Florida

Unknown spy....you'll never have a "fallen friendship" if you remember to be your own best friend....another well done poem....


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Oh my dear, there are enough tears for those I let near


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

When you love some one set it free, if it comes back, it's yours, very emotional hub, i am touched, voted up.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Lathing, Mark Billy, AnUtterTravisty, Jan, Jo, Sha, Deb, Kashmir, Carter,Joyce, Thelyricwriter, Ruby, Maria, KJF, Mhatter, Girishpuri

Thank you all for reading, for your wonderful comments. Written this a long time ago..inspired by someone I used to know...

@Sha..got the first step now! I have a passport :)


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Cool, Spy!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

thanks Sha!!!


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Rosemay50 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Beautifully written but so sad. It is hard to lose a ood friend, but we all find our own roads to travel.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. Powerfully emotional. We must keep searching and never give up because true friendship and love can be just around the next bend.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Rosemay, Gypsy, all my thanks for reading this hub of mine. Muwahugs.


vonda g nelson 4 years ago

Interesting poem, after reading one of the comments I will say true friendship isn't found it finds you. I believe that over the years friendships meaning and purpose has been diluted and has gotten watered down. The individuals that you need in your life will be brought to you......compliments of #friendship


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Vonda, its nice to read your message. very powerful words. thanks and nice meeting you


vonda g nelson 4 years ago

Good Morning Spy..... thx for your comment and it's a pleasure to meet you as well. CiaO


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teaches12345 4 years ago

I have lost a few good friendships over the years, ones that I valued but could not amend. Your poem brings this to mind and helps to make it understandable.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

wow thank you for this message. i am so glad you appreciate it too. Teaches, thanks again!


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nighthag 4 years ago from Australia

haunting and beautiful, this touches my heart as I think it will with many...losing in love and friendship is something I think we can all relate to


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

nighthag, thanks for the wonderful comment.


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Aw, friends do come and go, and it sad, and sometimes we do not even know why. There is always tomorrow to make a new friend. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

awwts thank you so much Faith. :)


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shruti sheshadri 4 years ago from Bangalore, India

you really are a great poet, simple words yet capture so many hearts! Beautiful :) Voted up!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

thank you shruti..that was flattering.heheh hugggs


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Nellieanna 4 years ago from TEXAS

Such poignant remembrance of a lost friendship, sweetly expressed . . .


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Nellieanna, thank you so much for the kind words. Love it!


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Denise Handlon 3 years ago from North Carolina

Beautiful poem...who among us has not felt the pain of a broken promise and the hope of a better friendship on the horizon. Rated up and beautiful.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you for sharing this and for the votes Denise!


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CriticalMessage 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

So sad can be so sweet... As proven by this piece 'spy'.... Well Done! Ups, Awesome, & Pinned.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much CM

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