He For Her and She For Him

She gazed at him and he at her,

Unspoken love; no need of words

The passion that they felt within

He for her and she for him


This love was one built over time

The gentle touch, rich and sublime

Thier love was one shared with no end

He for her and she for him


They shared some tears, some pain, and love

They shared their faith in God above

And with life chllenges they'll contend

He for her and she for him


As time passes and grows to an end

They'll share what aging brings to them

Starting love on the other side again

He with her and she with him

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tokigostudio1 5 years ago from Panama City Beach, Florida

I think this is really nice verse, but could use some very minor editing.


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Paradise7 5 years ago from Upstate New York

Sweet. Watch the capitalization of the initial word. Thanks!


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must65gt 5 years ago Author

Thanks to both of you for stopping by. I did this kind of quick while chatting with a friend about romantic Poetry. I posted it but I should have checked it for repeats and errors. Thanks for the suggestions and your time.


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Hello, hello, 5 years ago from London, UK

OMG that was excellent. So thoughtful and lots of warm heartedness. Thank you. Just wonderful.


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thebluestar 5 years ago from Northern Ireland

Her for Him, she certainly inspires your heart to write so beautifully. Him for Her, romance and love, what a recipe. Loved it.


Sunnie Day 5 years ago

Very beautiful poem..

Sunnie


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must65gt 5 years ago Author

Thanks to you both for your kind comments. As you both well know, its always nice to have others read and enjoy what we write./


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epigramman 5 years ago

....love the title and the sublime words which follow - I am here courtesy of the fabulous Blue Star who posted this most beautiful and romantic work to her Facebook page - so you see - advertising does work.

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must65gt 5 years ago Author

lol..Advertisong?... I appreciate your stopping by no matter how you got here...Blue is a good friend and I like her work as well...God Bless


Lesleysherwood 5 years ago

This is beautiful Its what has come from your heart and that's what I saw. I'm not worried about capitalization.


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must65gt 5 years ago Author

thanks Lesley, your time and considerate comments are most welcome.


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AEvans 5 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

Beautiful! Reminds me of you and your wife. I am speechless and you to are meant to be, for complete eternity. :)Thumbs up! Google +1


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must65gt 5 years ago Author

wow thanks very much. I appreciate your comments AE. There was an attempt to make an anthology of love poems but I think it went by the wayside. its always great to receive feed back and comments. God Bless


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AEvans 5 years ago from SomeWhere Out There

must65gt: Don't put it to the way side. When you write you write from the heart. Your BF lives in your house and I know the words you write are expression of the love you have for her. Keep writing them, publish the book as a gift to her. She knows your gift, just believe in you. :)


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phdast7 3 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

This really is terrific. I am very impressed and touched and a little jealous of "her." A beautiful poem. Sharing. ~~Theresa


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must65gt 3 years ago Author

Thanks phdastz, I'm always warmed when you stop by to reed and comment...God bless

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