Hold me in your love

HOLD ME WITH YOUR LOVE

When I smile, Kiss Me

When I laugh, Hug Me

When I cry, Caress Me

When I love, Hold Me

Hold me as if the world itself depended on how strong your hold is. Hold me as if you would shrivel into nothing if you let me go. Hold me until the breaths I take is nothing but your love. Hold me in your love and never let go, so when we are apart and I-

Smile, I will think about your tender kiss.

Laugh, I will think about your warm embrace.

Cry, I will think about your gentle caress.

And when my heart swells with love, I will feel your love wrap around me, holding me in it's hands like a butterfly and I will think of you. Then I will smile again, then the cycle will start over so I'm Always thinking of you and the way you hold me with your love.







COME LAY WITH ME

Come lay with me my love. I want to feel your skin smooth against mine.

Come lay with me my love. I want to feel the warmth of your arms around me.

Come lay with me my love. I want to feel your warm breath lightly against my neck.

Come lay with me my love. I want to feel your heart beat knowing that it belongs to me and if it stopped mine surly would too.

So lay with me my love. So that I can reasure myself that love really exists in every breath that you take and I will never deny that as long as your lying next to me.





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zoey24 5 years ago from South England

Beautiful :)


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you!!


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

Ah! Such sweet, beautiful and awesome poem. You will make an excellent poet. God bless you


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you I'm glad you liked it! And let God bless you as well.


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ubanichijioke 5 years ago from Lagos

I must admit, you have a rare stylish writing style which evokes strong emotions. You re indeed a great natural writer and poet. Bravo!


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you very much!! It seems I am always saying these words to you, your so kind.


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Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

Beautiful and I now look forward to reading many more hubs by you.

Take care

Eiddwen.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it! And you too!


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writer20 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

You are such a great writer of love poems. This one is beautiful.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Thank you and I am so greatful for your comment, it made my day!


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Hyphenbird 5 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

This is a lovely, tender tribute to love and the need of it. "Hold me as if the world itself depended on how strong your hold is." Perhaps it does, after all love is the greatest, strongest and most enduring creation. This really is a beautiful read. I enjoyed it very much.


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Sweets21 5 years ago Author

Oh wow!! Thank you soo much I'm very happy to know that you enjoyed my writing and thank you for your wonderful comment!

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