Guys are confusing... a poem about


Arghhhh you men are not simple you know,

I try and try to work you out,

On Monday you loved me, was the best you had,

Yet Tuesday you want to move out.

Naturally my head is slightly mashed,

I thought things with us were really good,

But yet apparently I have smothered you, made you sad.

I would of fixed this for sure if I could.

But we both know that this is impossible,

Because no matter what ever you said.

I'm actually a pretty perfect girlfriend,

and this nonsense is living solely in your messed up head.

Now they say the grass is greener,

Something which I'm not sure that I believe,

Because if this is the case, what a waste of time,

Because you always will just get up and leave.

You men blame us, we are naggy and cling,

How is this the case I wonder because as soon as I ignore you you ring,

"that's it" I think I am being strong,

I cant go on like this, everything I do is wrong.

All I ask for is a little love in return,

And all I receive is a broken heart, but still for you I yearn.

And so you have gone, however each other we still see,

The sex is still good, the passion is still there and I've finally realized it isn't me.

Because it dose not matter how old you are, how fit the women are you pull,

Each relationship you have you feel is boring, and you end up depressed life at a lull.

So I'm going to play you at your game, let you go and be free,

But sweetheart make your mind up as no one is that patient, not even me.

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tracy imevbore 4 years ago from england

nice poem dotty! however,I believe there are good guys and girls out there. i think the key to finding them is patience. If only people would realise how valuable they are.


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Treasuresofheaven 5 years ago from Michigan

There used to be a saying that men are simple, and easy to please. I guess in the world we live in today -- men have too many choices and they get confused themselves. I wonder do women allow men to be confused. Hear me when I say, Men nor women should not allow anyone to abuse or mistreat them. Nice writing.


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richtwf 6 years ago

I enjoyed reading this poem and thanks for sharing these thoughts.

Men can be confusing - Can't we! If only little boys and little girls were raised and taught better to treat each other with respect and taught how to communicate and understand each other better ... then maybe there would be more successful and loving relationships in this world. Food for thought!

Cheers for sharing!


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scord 6 years ago

MEN AREN'T HARD TO FIGURE OUT. THEY ARE JUST INSURE. 95 PERCENT ANYWAY.. THEY WANT YOU TO HAVE NO PAST NO RELATIONSHIP.NO KIDS. A VIRGIN. IF YOU CAN FIND ONE THAT WONT LET YOUR PAST BOTHER HIM THAT A GOOD ONE. BUT HE IS PROBABLY A NICE GUY AVG LOOKING AND YOU AND I BOTH KNOW KNOW CHICKS NEVER GO FOR THE NICE GUY. ITS ALWAYS THE BAD GUYS THE AGGRESSIVE ONES. THEY ARE EITHER BORN HOT OR SPEND HOUR IN THE GYM..


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dawnM 6 years ago from THOUSAND OAKS

Hi Dotty, good poem and said a lot in it about the push and pull of relationships and that is true in most. Great job


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dotty1 6 years ago from In my world Author

bless ya justom made a teenage old lady smile :-)


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justom 6 years ago from 41042

You got me and no the picture is HOT :-)


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dotty1 6 years ago from In my world Author

hi thank you for your coment . . In that case mission complete as that is what I was aiming for . . Or does my picture just look very old? Ha ha ha :)


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justom 6 years ago from 41042

This looks like something a high school girl would write. I'm not trying to be mean. Peace!! Tom


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epigramman 6 years ago

part 2 - men are confusing - ain't that the truth!!!!

And behind every great man ... there is a better woman!!!


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epigramman 6 years ago

What and Who are these entities you call 'men'???

I am a visitor from Mars and I will return to my planet shortly with a report about these curiosities called 'men'

I will also state for the record that you write superior hubs for all of your earthlings.

How do you say? Yes - very impressive and it is starting to stir up some human emotions for me - and by the way I am now learning - "Hey honey could you go and grab me a beer while I am watching the football game?"


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katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

Loved your inspiring and heartfelt expressions as to Men are confusing... Thanks and Peace :)


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Deborah Demander 6 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

Great poem. And they say women are hard to figure out.

Namaste.


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Singing Bill 6 years ago

Men are not the only ones that see the grass as greener on the other side. I have had several women say they love me and then move on.

Hang in there Dotty. Not all men are love em and leave em types.

Bill


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thevoice 6 years ago from carthage ill

love your sprit hub god bless you sure are


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blake4d 6 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings

You can assign a hub to one of the preset group categories, or you can create your own category name or designation.

I used already made categories in some cases

Poetry

Music

Then Made my own in others:

Selecions and Writings

Book Reviews and Commentary

Games Fun and Viral Tests

Men and Women

Paganism and Other Things

Photo Essays

Also you might notice that some poems some are mantras and

I state that seaparate with my name in the title so it gives a further distinction as a written piece.

Like:

Surveillance - A Mantra by Blake4d

(Instead of

Surveillance

(See what I mean...let me know if I explained that well enough, I don't know if anybody has made a hub about such things or not, I just did it on my own accord. Love your efforts and so glad I rocked you to such a fury to write more on the hub)

xoxo Blake4d


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dotty1 6 years ago from In my world Author

they sure did, I am most enjoying your work...and will be reading it for some time!

Hmm question for you....if you write a lyric how do you present that in a hub so is a lyric not a poem? is that a daft question?


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blake4d 6 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings

Nice job, glad my comments inspired you a bit...

Love to see a woman with talent, blessed be babydoll =)

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