You're Right

I'm headstrong,

and put up a good fight,

I'm unpredictable,

but keep you on your toes,

I'm silly,

and laugh at my own jokes,

I'm smart,

but not too smart for my own good,

I'm independent,

and like to do things for myself,

I'm classy,

but not even close to being snobby,

I'm passionate,

and you know how to stoke my fire,

I'm flirtatious,

but only have eyes for you,

I'm romantic,

and love a slow dance in your arms,

I'm confused,

but you won't hear me out,

I'm angry,

and don't like this feeling,

I'm sad,

but you're not here to comfort me,

I'm sorry,

and apologize if I hurt you,

I'm determined,

but can wait till you're ready,

I'm patient,

and can wait for your forgiveness,

You're right,

but unwilling to forgive.

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Darlene Sabella 5 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

Nice, thank you for your thoughts, love it....


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No_Clue 5 years ago

I really like this poem! Strong and flowing with emotion. Lovely! and your pics are lovely too!


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DexisView 5 years ago from New England Author

Glad you enjoyed, Darski.

Thanks, No Clue. Photography is a new passion. I'll be sharing more :)


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Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

Hi, I love this, is says it all! the photos are great, cheers nell


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DexisView 5 years ago from New England Author

Hi Nell, Glad you loved it!


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Mrs. J. B. 5 years ago from Southern California

Very well put together. Your poem is you..


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DexisView 5 years ago from New England Author

thanks, jb!


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Minnetonka Twin 5 years ago from Minnesota

Powerful and thought provoking poetry. I bet the ending has different meanings for everyone. I made up my own meaning to this poem with the picture summing it up for me.


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DexisView 5 years ago from New England Author

Glad you enjoyed it Minnetonka. Sometimes it is best to leave the intended meaning up to the readers imagination. Glad you enjoyed....thanks for the comments.


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ahorseback 3 years ago

This reflection is of the perfect woman , one who knows she isn't , and yet strives onward ! Without this outlook ,men would be lost !....awesome my friend !..Ed


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DexisView 3 years ago from New England Author

Thanks, Ed. I had forgotten all about this hub and the emotions that went with it. Amazing, but 2 years later I'm thinking I could have written this exact poem again today. I would never want to be the person that is unable or unwilling to forgive.

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