You will always have a piece of my heart- a poem about first loves.

First romances don't always end in a fairytale. But no matter where your paths take you, that person will always have a piece of your heart.

When I first saw you, I was in love with another

And then through the years you and I became lovers.

No stronger love, surely, could ever exist.

It's the most beautiful feeling, on this I must insist.

And if years ago, someone told me this would be so

I would have laughed, and calmly, shook my head no.

For the love I feel for you took me completely by surprise.

For yesterday you were my friend, but today you are my life.

And you are:

My confidante.

My backbone.

My comforter through the night.

And you are:

My heart.

My inspiration.

And the apple of my eye.

But sometimes I take you for granted, and I know that this is so.

So I wrote you this poem, so you always will know.

How I love you..

Need you...

Respect, and adore you.

I hope I'll always love you this way.

I hope from me you will never stray.

But I know that life brings changes, so...if we should ever part...

know that always and forever you'll have a piece of my heart.

Love with all your heart, soul and mind.

Being in love is a beautiful thing. The sun shines brighter; the sky looks a little more clearer and the world seems like a wonderful place to be. Love is the most powerful emotion a person can ever experience. The giddy feeling of love doesn't always last forever, but we can fall into a comfortable companionship and friendship that can last forever if it's cared for and nurtured.

Love cannot be taken for granted it must be respected and treated like the cherished gift that it is. Whether this is your first love or your fiftieth it must be seen and cared for as a rare jewel. Without love the world is a bleak place to be in.

There's a thin line between love and hate.

There's a thin line between love and hate. Love can sour quickly when it's not nurtured or, taken for granted. Most couples don't fall out of love, but fall out of respect. Love is blind and we are willing to put up with little things we don't like in the beginning. The funny thing about love is it changes. It doesn't make sense. There's no reason or rationing to it, it just is.

We can't control love, or who we love because it takes us by surprise. If we could control love most of us would; especially after being hurt the first time around. We would try to moderate it or not love as hard over fear of being hurt. God is His infinite wisdom took the ability to control that out of our hands and so we love.

What does your "ideal love" look like?

What type of love do you see lasting forever?

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Why do you feel some relationships fail?

In my article I state that most couples do not fall out of love, but fall out of respect. Falling out of respect can turn precious love into hate. Do you agree?

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Why is it so hard to stay in love?

Most people fantasize about love and romance in a fairytale way, but love is not a fairytale. They want to stay in love forever and are unrealistic about the union. Some people are in love with being in love but have no clue how to be in a relationship; so when problems arise they're quick to walk away.

Many people who walk away are searching for something unattainable, which is perfection. There is no perfect person all relationships takes compromise and sacrifice and respect. Love starts out with passion, but after that fizzles you're at a cross road that either dies or grows into something deeper and lasting. Love can last if it is respected. If it is not respected, no matter how hard you love, eventually it will die.

© 2013 Dana Tate

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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Beautiful and I now look forward to so many more.


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Dana Tate 3 years ago from LOS ANGELES Author

Eiddwen, I thank you so much for reading and appreciating my poem.

Yadaiyah_LaSakalhaahmath 3 years ago

Hello Dana dear reda your poem again and get over the fact that you are talented with words...i am proud of you AHABATHA...

Yadaiyah_LaSakalhaahmath 3 years ago

Hello Dana dear read your poem again and cannot get over the fact that you are talented with words...i am proud of you, AHABATHA...

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Dana Tate 3 years ago from LOS ANGELES Author

thank you very much. and thanks for commenting

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Dana Tate 3 years ago from LOS ANGELES Author

thank you, your kind words are much appreciated.

brown eyes 3 years ago

First loves are the most romantic loves. Unfortunately, they can also be the most painful. I love the way you string words together on not just this poem but all you others as well I look forward to hearing more from you.

Harriett 3 years ago

This was a beautiful read. You are very talented with stringing your words together.

chocolate 3 years ago

I will always remember my first love. fortunately he will not have a piece of my heart. But I do know other guys who will. beautiful poem.

Alonzo 3 years ago

Can't remember my first love...but the poem is beautiful for the people who do remember their first love.

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Dana Tate 3 years ago from LOS ANGELES Author

Chocolate your first love is not always your best love but I'm glad you did have someone special and can relate to this poem anyway. Thanks for commenting and stopping by.

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Dana Tate 3 years ago from LOS ANGELES Author

Alonzo, the past love that you think of from time to time is your first love. It doesn't always have to be your first love. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

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Harishprasad 2 years ago from India

Dana, your heart is pulsating with such warm love that I have no matching words to describe it. I love this beautiful poem and the concluding words-'' forever you'll have my piece of heart '' are such awesome that they'll resonate foever in my heart. Lovely poetry, my friend. Thank you and all peace and happiness. :-)

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Dana Tate 2 years ago from LOS ANGELES Author

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem my friend: Thank's for visiting and commenting.

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word55 2 years ago from Chicago

Hi again Dana, As you can see, I'm catching up on a lot of reading today. A peaceful Father's Day is allowing me to do just that. This was another gorgeous poem, a poem of your first love, Wow! The first love lays the path of love and how good love should be in the future. Well, love can last forever. Did you know that?

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Dana Tate 2 years ago from LOS ANGELES Author

Word55, first happy fathers day! Yes first loves are special. Unfortunately my first love did not last. Through the years I had a hard time finding a true love, it wasn't always their fault I had to understand myself to understand what I was looking for in a man and know my true self-worth. I know that love can last forever, I have seen it and it is the most beautiful gift if you can truly find it.

Vicki 2 years ago

So much info in so few words. Tostoly could learn a lot.

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PegCole17 15 months ago from Dallas, Texas

You've hit the nail on the head with your observations. Respect is the key to lasting relationships. It's about the way people talk to one another, the way they talk about their partner when they're apart as well. Love can remain strong through the years and when it does, it's beautiful. We're about to celebrate our twenty-seventh year of marriage.

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Dana Tate 15 months ago from LOS ANGELES Author

Congratulations!! You certainly seem to have a good idea how to keep a marriage strong. I have witnessed so many couples abuse and take advantage of the love their partner has for them. I know of someone who had a good man for 25 years. She used and abused and belittled this man every chance she got, even in front of others. He ended up having an affair and finally left and married the other woman. Love is something to cherish and not be taken for granted. We must not assume the other person will not eventually get tired.

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