Someone not Strong...


There was something bout him…

something like I’ve been wishing all along…

something I knew I would want over again…



I’ve been looking around close to me yet he came from a faraway land. He’s quite not like those some random guys you meet anywhere. The moment he spoke to me, I knew I found a gem…oh so rare, delicate cut, kissed by an angel…I wonder would I cry touching it…what if I want it…


Eyes with shade of the skies, messy hair, so straightforward, one look, he seems a jerk but nothing is what it seems the moment he smiled at me. I wonder how many hearts have been broken by that smile…why do I care…


With lots of wonders and what-ifs, I kinda knew where this was going.


One day he asked me what kind of person I would want to love. I answered, “Someone not strong…”


He was very puzzled so he asked why. I told him, he would know soon…


I had a glimpse of every corner of his life, his secrets been unfolded. One day, I realized I started to care. The more I knew about him, the more it made me weak. The gem I’ve found was overpowering me. I didn’t touch it yet, but it already captured me. It was getting closer…gleaming to be touched…wanting me to want him…perhaps more than that. I just know now I would cry not touching it. I just know now I don’t only want it…I love it like much.


There was something bout him…something like I’ve been wishing all along…something I knew I would want over again…


Apparently he’s never forgotten what has been baffling him…so he asked again though he had me. “Hmm about that person you’d want to love...why would he be someone not strong?”


I smiled at his so serious face and just said, “Yea, he’s someone not strong… not strong enough to let me go.”


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

This is so lovely, blaise! love the overall meaning :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hey there lovely Invictus! :) Thank you, thank you, thank you!

That was so quick ;p


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 6 years ago

well, perfect timing for publishing, I guess ;p


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

yup yup ;) it's so nice to catch you in here now ;p


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wandererh 6 years ago from Singapore

Poems and anything poemy (reads like a poem) is not my favorite on HubPages. Most of the time, I just click the back button after reading the first but...this one's nice. I enjoyed it. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Ah yea we all have diff tastes.. Glad you enjoyed :) Thank you


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Great thoughts told well. I love your heart and your work! Thanks Blaise!


Justine76 6 years ago

what a ride.. life and love..Im so glad you let us see your side of it. This was so simply stated but it means alot. :)


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Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

I enjoyed Someone not strong thouroly and connot wait to read more!


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

What a lovely hub. It has a really interesting idea going through it. You have a great "take" on romance and love and relationships, Blaise. He sounds interesting even from where I am sitting! Ha! Magic.


dark heart 6 years ago

I'm terribly impressed.

I like it that your soul saw him.

I think it's in the spirit where these

things happen.


Michael Sentro 6 years ago

What a lucky boy. I'm green with envy.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Mik, thank you! You're works and you are one of the most beautiful here in Hubpages. I'm glad I found you in here :)

Hi, Just! Love your new avatar..Life is a ride..one freakin ride! Love is the ticket, if we lost it, we're lost..Thank you pretty Justine! :) You know how much I love your works ;)

Mentalist Acer, I'm so glad to see you again :) I like your simplicity..

Hey, Cathy! Thank you for your stunning comments moi friend :) Yup, makes me forget a lot other things when I'm in love..He is interesting and is fooling me with his magic..

Hi, DH! Me has impressed Mr. Joe again? Thank you DH Yes, I agree, the spirit moves in mysterious ways..

Hello, Michael Sentro! How could you leave with just your name and this pretty comment..you are so unfair! XD


Michael Sentro 6 years ago

Ninja are like that.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Whoa, seems I am prone to ninjas nowadays heheh Peace.


poetlorraine 6 years ago

peace and love amen..... love that you love this guy...so do i...


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lancelonie 6 years ago

So lovely! Very cool!

Thanks for sharing! :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Poet glad to see you :) I'll tell him that ;) Thanks

Lance, you're cool. Thanks ;)


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Blaise, if he is worth it, go for it. He sounds like a meal most women wanna eat, the way you tell it! LOL! Aw, heck, listen to me, I just had breakfast. I have food on the brain. I can't function without breakfast. Your poetry glides along so easy! Great writing, as usual! x


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hi moi friend! Missed this comment..I was starving when I wrote it so maybe that's why hahahah Then go eat, I just hope my poetry was good for your appetite LOL Thank you XO


seasoning 6 years ago

i need to let something go, but i am not strong enough either. Aint it just the pitts, enjoyed this thanks


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Always hard to let go..Glad you enjoyed this, thank you Sea :)


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patrick fealey 6 years ago from California

""I wonder how many hearts have been broken by that smile…why do I care…"" lucid insight on the process of a woman's attraction . .


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello Patrick! Thanks for commenting and nice meeting you :)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

My curiosity got the better of me, and I'm catching up again. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Well I'll catch up, too. I missed so many things dear Lord! Happy that my broadband is back. :) This was pretty..did I write this? LMAO Oh well, someone not strong...I am one. Glad to see you lovely Cathy! XO


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Oh.my.God. I knew what you were talking about, it is kinda tragic in a way, isn't it. Deep down in the pits of our souls we are hoping for another not so strong one... =) I say, this is a really beautiful story, really touching and overwhelming. The one, that makes you hold your breath till the last word...


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Yeah in our life we meet people who would become our weakness and strength too. If you found that one, never let him go :)

Thank you for reading my old stuff Max! *hugs* You are amazing!

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