The Ambiguous Life

The Ambiguous Life

She slowly walks in time and place
Recognizing not one face
The world became an open void
Love absent now and unemployed

How did things get to be this way
Those dreaded words she chose to say
Now life is just an empty word
And death is something more obscure

The ones she loved passed long ago
To preserve her soul she let love go
To touch, to feel, to hold one close
Three things she now misses most

Immortality was her choice to make
The sound of it to her seemed great
So she traded her life for another’s
So they could join departed brothers

Each day she offers this life infernal
But no one wants to live eternal
While others die or drown at sea
She dreams of death to set her free

She loved and laughed a felt life’s passion
Then watched her love end with their passing
She tried suicide a time or two
Then felt the pain it put her through

If by chance you cross her path
Harken not the words she’ll cast
Or you’ll exchange your life for hers
And become part of an immortal world©

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Title :: The Ambiguous life
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Hello, hello, 5 years ago from London, UK

That is brilliant. I enjoyed it so much reading it.


Jasper420 5 years ago

Enjoyed reading this very well written


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must65gt 5 years ago Author

thanks to both of you for stoppping by. I am happy you found this an enjoyable read...God Bless

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