The Part of a Broken-hearted Girl

One time in our life, our heart gets broken. Some grow stronger but others never recover.


Staring at the girl with the lavender eyes

Sitting alone under a bright blue sky

Whispering a sad sweet note

Echoes of faith and a sprinkle of hope


She silently wiped her tears away

And gazed into the open sea

Just because she kept her life whole

You don’t have the right to mock her soul


Her friends ruined her life

Jealousy and envy on sight

The rain washed away her dreams

Together with her so-called best friend


I think she learned her lessons well

For she picked herself up when she fell

From afar, I still looked at her

And somehow I say a little prayer


You deserved to have the lead role

Not just the part of a broken-hearted girl

Go throw that script away

You still have a chance to re-write the play


She's a lovely and sweet young girl

But people around betrayed her

Now she's all alone

Floating on an empty song


Her hair danced on the light breeze

And lips on a soft twist

Those lavender eyes smudged with tears

Was the last thing I saw in her


I stared one last time to this girl

She lived on my past and I barely know her

While I put down the mirror and smiled

Ready to face the journey called "life"


xoxo.


© 2013 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.


Sometimes, I just have to hold my head up high, try not to cry and say goodbye... Because I'm so tired of playing the part of a broken-hearted girl.

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

life is what you make of it , you have written a beautiful poem.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you...

Very well written and expressed. Heartbreaks are part of our lives sadly but when we healed, we always feel specially happy. Move on and embrace a new happy life.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks Devika for such a nice compliment.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Blaise for such a wonderful comment.


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Ah, you surprised me and got a smile. Very good!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Unknown, beautifully done, I could almost feel the pain and betrayal. They do say, however, ' what doesn't kill us makes us stronger.' Up and more


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shiningirisheyes 3 years ago from Upstate, New York

Outstanding Spy! I never saw the ending coming but when it did, it had one powerful impact on me. Glad to know she picked herself back up as I happen to think she is an amazing human being with a beautiful soul. She has so much goodness and talent to offer this world. She makes a difference.

Voting up and sharing


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

beautiful poetry spy......

"floating on an empty song "

great image ... it is burned into my mind ..

thank You for the moment.

Michael


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Oh, how every beautiful (as it is written by a beautiful person) and with a lovely ending ---never look back!

Excellent poetry.

Voted up +++ and sharing.

I am working on one now, and I want to link this poem to it.

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Awesomely written, your words were filled with emotion and left this reader in awe . Well done !

Vote up and more !!! SHARING !


Larry Wall 3 years ago

Ms. Spy,

I am really proud of you and grateful that we met, in writing, and not in person. I think a remarkable future awaits you. I will always be thinking about you. Your writing is amazing, and your poetry is excellent. You are a talented person and from all I can tell, a very kind and caring person.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

So well said and acted upon. A memory is all that is left, and a success has flourished. Outstanding!.


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Nice reflection, thank you


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

@Jackie, Jo, Beckie, Michael, Faith, Tom, Larry, Deb, Mhatter:

Thanks a lot friends for your unending support on my writings. Thank you so much for all the ups, votes and shared. appreciate it very much especially on your comments!


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jantamaya 3 years ago from UK

I never read poetry... I thought. This what I read here made me cry (just a little, just a touch of a tear).

Spy, you are a MASTER of POETRY.

I've seldom read anything better written than this poem. (Voted up+shared).


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Lipnancy 3 years ago from Hamburg, New York

The feeling really some out in this poem.


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Rui Carreira 3 years ago from Torres Novas

Nice one Mycee! It's true... I don't think that applied only to girls.. meh


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ChristyWrites 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

What beautiful images you create of this lady. Well done.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

@Jantamaya: I just woke up and read my HP comments.. and this is really a WWOOOWW!!! You really made my day! Thank you sooo much!


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Nancy!


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Rui.. Thanks for this wonderful comment.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Christy! Thank you so much.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Oh this is just fabulous Myz. So much emotion and I was so taken aback at the end, that gave me the biggest smile. :))


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Rosemay!


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girishpuri 3 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Very well written and quite emotional, well done, God bless.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Girishpuri.


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Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

Ohhh, that last line was powerful, Myz…but this entire poem was beautiful and filled with amazing metaphor. Wonderful work by a talented poet. :-)


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Genna! That was really amazing!


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fpherj48 3 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

"Some hearts grow stronger, but others, never recover."

Sad, but true, spy.....some broken hearts cause us pain for a lifetime.....This is so moving and profound..... Thank you for the beauty....UP+++


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teaches12345 3 years ago

Very painful to experience a broken heart. Very touching.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi, Paula. Thanks for this wonderful comment.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Dianna, thank you!


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rajan jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

A very touching poem and an unexpected ending. Thanks for sharing this.


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unknown spy 3 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Rajan.


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rdsparrowriter 3 years ago

This is just beautiful. Lovely it touched my heart.

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